some nice ideas... got a little samey thought towards the end ... perhaps the addition of another element would help that but I'm not sure what.. also it's nice to hear a different genre being used.. done quite well as well... nice ... keep 'em coming brother
Thank you so much for the review. Ya, I'm sure as well that something needs to be added.....but I as well don't know what. Chrischarles who has been doing my vocals always seems to have a way of adding what the track needs to bring it to its full potential. I don't play instruments, only use loops so it gets difficult to find loops to match and so the track repeats it self alot. Usually when chris puts his vocals in place he'll add an instrument here or there that changes the whole track sound for the better. Thank You for stopping by.
Gord
so nice to hear that 4x4 sound again...it's raises it head every now and then... always big on the underground though.. the bass kicks brother I love it... nice work... keep 'em coming brother
there are some nice ideas here for me that drum tracks needs to be thicker.. that kick should do exactly that KICK...it should be BOOM >>BOOM>>BOOM it's needed to drive the track along.. the other sounds work great and all seem to have their own separate spaces... don't get me wrong I enjoyed the listen it just lacked that depth that you would expect from a dance track... keep 'em coming brother
Ok. I think its sade to say with this many reviews, something has to be done with this track. I think I probably need to retry this now I've got better at making certain parts stand out, and believe me I'm going to do something to this now, a complete remake I think.
Thanks for the review, expect a remake soon, and I'll send my demos to you soon as well once I get them all finished.
great track...that bass line is fantastic ... for me the track is crying out for a vocal of some kind... nicely done I honestly no critic at all.. which is a first for me ... keep 'em coming brother
hey there bro!
thanks for the comment... vocals would be really cool on this... if done right, it would really highlight the track. and man, thanks for the words.. really appreciate it!
I would say that intro some nice ideas but way too long trust me I love an intro as much as the next man but my !!! as from the rest of the tracks... I would say the drum track need to go down and the basses need to come up because everything is being drown at the mo... there is nothing that can't be fixed here with small tweaks here and there... keep 'em coming brother
this reminds me of early 80's electro kinda like the things they were doing when the synthesizers first became available ...nice .. I love a retro track... keep 'em coming brother
some nice ideas.. it's difficult for me to give you an honest opinion because ...well... I truly hate pop as a genre... its far to clean and sanitized for me... the vocals are a little out of time but I don't think it matters too much because thats an easy fix.. over all sung with heart and that really all I can say... keep those colabs coming brother
Thanks Numberjack,I've been playing since I was 10yrs old,my grandfather taught me basic chords so I do have to credit learning at a young age...and I've been through a lot of music since then!
Thanks again for listening and commenting.
some nice ideas here ... it just seems to suffer a little from a not quite there mix down... some of your levels are not quite right so that leaves everything fighting for air... I enjoyed the listen a nice cross over dnb track... keep 'em coming brother
there are some good ideas here but it feels like to music takes second place to the vocals which left me with a feeling that they didn't belong on the track.... it's a shame really because the dnb beats are nicely done... nice ideas... keep 'em coming brother
some nice ideas... would probably fit more into industrial than dnb but I'm not the genre police so I wont call ya on it... the metal guitar remind me very much of what alividlife is doing at the moment death/thrash metal mixed with dnb.. over all I enjoy the listen.. keep 'em coming brother
some very nice ideas here... loved the glitchy sounds of that pad... the drum track is well put together but probably needs more punch in places.. nice.. keep 'em coming
thank you yeah about the punch everything needs more punch i think^^ but this is hard too reach because with more punch comes more other problems
seeya
ioka
some interesting ideas here.. Industrial feel too it as well.. nice .. I would take some of that distortion out but other than that solid track.. keep 'em coming brother...
there are some great idea here... you do love that guitar loop don't ya?... the sub is a nice touch... I would say your drum track get drowned at times but nothing that can't be fix by side chaining.. nice I enjoy the listen very late 90's.. keep 'em coming brother
some good ideas here you just need to flatten them out a bit because everything comes across quite confused... to start with I though it would be one of those dnb techno cross overs but you stayed true to the dnb... nice... keep 'em coming brother
I like the idea... but the dub step section has far to much reverb on it for me.. the dnb side is well composed and produced ... are you normally a dnb producer?.. any nice idea... I enjoyed the listen.. keep 'em coming
nice .. I'm not surprised alividlife liked this track it right up his street... dnb with that metal edge... for me I would have liked a little more thickness... but I like your style brother.. nice .. keep 'em coming
not really dnb for me but I won't hark on because you've heard that from the others.. it is a great track with the edge of a dnb knife dipped into it... thanks I enjoyed the listen.. keep 'em coming brother
100% right there numberjack. I like my newer unrelased stuff more, and it won't be unrealeased for long. This one is chillout on speed, I'm actually working on a drum and bass track :P
some nice ideas... I would say the drum needs to com down a tiny bit because it drowns at times.. very hip hop based... well composed and put together.... keep 'em coming brother
nice.. there are some great ideas here... I love the idea of orchestral dnb... would have liked to here a bit more sub though.. but thats me being pick..nice track... keep 'em coming
some nice ideas at the start that bass that comes in around 1 min is just too much brother needs to come down in the mix as does that sub that comes in around 1:30.. they take over the whole track... that panning is a little nauseating if I had been wearing headphones I'd have been sick for sure... there are some good ideas here just some elements need to be toned down to make it a good track...keep 'em coming brother
I hate to be the one to break this but this ain't no dnb brother.. it needs to be faster at around 175bpm.. not quite sure why I always have to be the genre police but... hey ho... there are some good ideas here and the synths are solid.. the intro would fit a dnb track well.. you could drop in at around 1.10mins.. as i said some good ideas and all in all a good starting point
some nice ideas here.. I'm not that it fits the genre but I'm not sure what genre it would fit in... still.. a nice track.. I would have like to hear a higher bass line and maybe a sub in there as well... your drums are just a touch to high in the mix and at times they drown out the other elements..like I said some go ideas.. keep 'em coming
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Don't know why- but I like it, adds element of surprise.
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Thanks for the review, expect a remake soon, and I'll send my demos to you soon as well once I get them all finished.
Ste :P
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thanks for the comment... vocals would be really cool on this... if done right, it would really highlight the track. and man, thanks for the words.. really appreciate it!
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When I convert tunes into mp3 the levels change.
Don't know why- but I like it, adds element of surprise.
And loud noises make me smile