folk? I don't know, I think more rnb than folk, but the idea is good even if your voice is not always perfect, you are more of a creator than a singer! nice words!
Michael
thanks Michael i'll take that all day long creator :)) yeah i was unsure on the genre, as i explained to Wayne i wanted to put commercial but its not an option so i have changed it to R&B that was Morash' genre and you suggest it too :)
Thank you phantom production! I tried my best with the samples I could find, the layering beat and composisition was all me the samples were mostly vox, a few scratch vinyls, beatbox etc
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Hi dude, a little blues is good even if I would have preferred a less rhythmic vocal, but you wanted it like that and it can be listened to on its own! good job john!
Michael
I would say the official genre is americana, but they don't have that option here on looperman... Blues is certainly the genre of the istrumental. After I add the lyrics though I think it becomes more americana.
The instrumental certainly kept me entertained, when I was recording. I could see that the vocals overwhelm the sound a bit... But I thought it turned out decent with the vocals added.
"According to the Americana Music Association, Americana is “contemporary music that incorporates elements of various American roots music styles, including country, roots-rock, folk, bluegrass, R&B and blues, resulting in a distinctive roots-oriented sound that lives in a world apart from the pure forms of the genres"
Hey Paul, you're not going to make only friends lol...apart from that, I think that today CC has become very good, I remember 2 years ago he had difficulty tuning his compositions with the tonality of the voice, which is no longer the case today..even if I don't use them, loops are part of certain styles of music, maybe a little too easy when you're a musician but on LM there are a lot of talents who know how to use it! in any case, very good job on your composition!
Michael
thanks Michael, it is all meant with good fun :) i got nothing against CC i like his work and have commented enough on it, although i played drums and a few keys when i was younger, this place got me back into it, im not brilliant but i have a go. i have nothing against loops but half your job is done really, i went all in singing as i never dared sing when i was young, im lucky here great artist to share with and ive done loads of collabs too, im good for the community and always promote more sharing, i dont need judgement, nobody here does we all want feedback to help us improve but being a songwriter comments give you inspiration and i make full use of them when i write :))
I have rerecorded these chords many times trying to recreate the original folk song based on my lyrics.
Your comment makes me realize that each time I record it, the song changes categories. I have another song posted called 'Steps to the Wind" and it is most definitely progressive folk rock. Anyway thanks for your comment.
whoooo Paul and CC, cool guys, it’s like we’re on Facebook! I listened to your composition twice, if you had wanted to do it differently, you have more than enough talent to do it differently! I never give criticism on the composition of songs, everyone has their own "know-how" to create...for the sound it's something else when really it's "rotten" I say it and that's not the case here !
Michael
lol, i,m cool Michael, just said my piece, i am just like you, ive never once in my time here criticized anyone, if i can give advice, i will if i like the track if i cant help the track or its not my cup of tea, i dont comment simple as that. yeah if the sound is shocking i would just say its hard to listen but not rude. and yeah if i gave it a couple more hrs i would of had it spaced better, the one thing people overlook is the fact your working with one mp3 you need all the stems to get it the best, everyone should know this, i was also happy with the sound i use stereo separation on each layer but not on my master but i noticed the master was panned hard right separation so i moved it to the middle, thanks for the listen and comment bro
Beautiful song but I think your voice needs to be reworked a little, the tone seems right to me, maybe add a little effect to your voice, good job!
Michael
Hi my friend, this is a nice composition, it can be a little repetitive but with a good voice like Angel or someone else in the same style it should do it. very good job dude!
Michael
Thanks Michael.
I appreciate it sir. I made a synth to change up the second half of the verses but elected to delete it. I thought it was making the track sound too HipHop instead of R&B. This is my first ever attempt at a R&B instrumental and everything I kept trying to add made it HipHop to my ears, haha.
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The instrumental certainly kept me entertained, when I was recording. I could see that the vocals overwhelm the sound a bit... But I thought it turned out decent with the vocals added.
"According to the Americana Music Association, Americana is “contemporary music that incorporates elements of various American roots music styles, including country, roots-rock, folk, bluegrass, R&B and blues, resulting in a distinctive roots-oriented sound that lives in a world apart from the pure forms of the genres"
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Your comment makes me realize that each time I record it, the song changes categories. I have another song posted called 'Steps to the Wind" and it is most definitely progressive folk rock. Anyway thanks for your comment.
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I appreciate it sir. I made a synth to change up the second half of the verses but elected to delete it. I thought it was making the track sound too HipHop instead of R&B. This is my first ever attempt at a R&B instrumental and everything I kept trying to add made it HipHop to my ears, haha.
Thank again.
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