WongKiShoo
Norwich, United Kingdom
Joined : 27th Feb 2010 - 14 years ago
Last Online : 2nd Jan 2025 - 1 month ago
WongKiShoo comments on tracks
WongKiShoo has posted 154 comments on other peoples tracks.
on Track That Needs Vocals by Paulynomial
I agree with Hertz.. needs to be developed more, but you're planning to address that anyway haha.
Seriously, message me when this is finished - would love to hear the finished version! :)
Great job so far!
on Lost Dreams Piano Rap beat by Gipish
Personally I'd add more layers.. maybe some strings that go off on a tangent to the main theme,.. kinda like a lead I guess.
Anyways, good job
on Where I Belong - Instrumental - Vocal Ready by BradoSanz
on Skybreaker II by zacvoos
Nice track you got here! Right from the intro I could tell it was gonna be a track that I'd like (I'm a chord pluck fanboy haha)
You've got a whole heap of different synths going on throughout and the vast majority of them fit really well. At no point did I feel like the different sounds were competing for my attention and getting that many synth melodies talking to each other without mishap is no mean feat!! Definitely a sign of a good producer...
What I think would take this track up a notch? A better mix.
When you boss the writing to a level like you clearly are - nothing less than "awesome" will do on the final mixdown/master :)
Great job bro!
OffKi
on BigRedButton - Oh Whah by Spudsy
Wasn't sure if you were still making choons or not after being quiet for so long..
Good to see you're still in the game mate :)
Slowed down for a while and did some ghost producing.
yeah man, still on it.
on My Contest Intrumental - Opinions Needed by BradoSanz
Great piece of music you have here :)
I'm not a big listener of this sort of music, so I probably don't have much insight to offer.. however, I do feel the chorus could be beefed up a bit more with maybe a string section (I can even hear the melody in my head) I think it'd go really well!
I haven't read any of the other comments so you may have covered this already - but are you planning on laying vocals over this as well?
Really really good job overall!
WKS
I actually agree with you on the strings, and they will come - but not until I add the vocals :) Glad you stopped by for a listen and appreciate the input!
Brado
on Twin shadows by mudhoen
The track could use a little more variation in the way of chord progressions to make things more interesting, maybe some low end bass as well..
I think you're on the right track in developing as an artist, most of the elements are there and the rest will come with time and practice :)
Good job man
Ciao o/
on New World - ft RomyHarmony by MegaTone
There's definitely enough variation in this to keep it interesting throughout and I like the creativity on display.. you have a natural ability.
My only criticism: the mix is pretty muddy and you can see from the waveform that you're pushing things too high volume wise (which actually has the opposite effect n squashes sounds) .. but otherwise this is pretty impressive :)
Great job man!
I'm still a bit new to this, and I had no idea what was going wrong, so that really helped. I play around with it and see what I can do!
on AZZYKO - WAKE UP by AZZYKO
I think you have a bright future ahead of you!
WKS
on SHE ROCKS by Timmons2
Have you still got the stems for this?? Coz I'd love to mix and master this for you.. it's really deserving of some special attention :)
Great job man, glad to see you've still got that creative flair.
WKS
on Proximal Vicinity by Psychedeletribe
You're reply to the first comment is right.. bass comes first. And I guess that because you chose to ignore that unspoken rule is what makes this mix stand out - good job :)
WKS
on ShortBusMusic - Proximal Vicinity - DaveDaG mix by DaveDaG
I don't get what the big deal is about it sounding close to the original or not.. in my mind if someone gives you some stems to mix and master your job as the mix/mastering engineer is to get those stems sounding as good as possible and preserve the intentions the composer had in the first place.. that being said you hit the nail on the head man :)
Good job!
WKS
on Proximal Vicinity Spivkurl Mix 13B Master B by Spivkurl
I gotta say I'm pleasantly surprised Spiv :)
Of the mixes I've listened to so far I think this is definitely in the top 3. My only criticism would be that the kick drum gets a bit lost beneath that heavy bass line.. but otherwise everything else is near on perfect to my ears - especially love the width and clarity you achieved on the strings at the end. Great job!
WKS
on PROXIMAL VICINITY by strscottT
Out of the 4 I've heard (including mine) - this is the best one so far :) .. really impressed with how much boom you have in the kick. I wasn't brave enough with the EQ I don't think lol..
I really like how wide this sounds.. really panoramic. Great job :)
on Proximal Vicinity- Short Bus mixing comp by Ensam
Really good idea with shifting the piano up.. definitely adds more sparkle and gives you more breathing space.. wish I thought of that now lol. I also like how you managed to vamp up the kick drum and get it to stand out.
The only thing for me really would be that the woodwind at the end was a little over-powering, but not by a great deal. Good job man!
WKS
Thanks again
Simon
on Trap VS EDM by DeLaBeatz
on ShortBusMusic vs Magix by beerling1970
Normally when I hear loops put together from purely loops found on looperman they sound like an assault on the ears... Not so in this case. Very easy listening.. Bravo!
on Victory by EazyBeatz
on Der 12Elf - the twelve elf by joecramer
This is a style that I haven't really heard before, but I like it! Good job :)
Greets
WKS
joe
on Always Now by Maffin159
Love the instrumental. Vocals are nice and laid back.. they could do with a little more in the way of EQ and effects, but other than that good job man!
WKS
PS - if you like, I'll help with mixing in the vocals a bit better. Just get in contact if interested :)
on DJ Udom Teack 01 by ichundiddu
Did you make the loops yourself or did you buy them? For someone's first track this is approaching pro level..
WKS
All Loops are Downloaded from this website and mixed with Audacity.
on A series of riffs by FreeRadical
First thing I've heard from you in a while!
Loving the sound of these and the mix sounds pretty much spot on. Still trying to figure out why you've uploaded this as a 10 minute track when all of those different parts could stand as tracks on their own??
Either way great job man!
WKS
Glad you could drop by for a listen.
FR
on OdotZED - Greezy street instrumental by OdotZED
Been a while, hope ur good..?
I persuaded one of my mates to sign up to this site tonight n he found ur track straight away n wants to lay a few barz over it, that cool yeah? I'll deal with mixing it n stuff but obviously i aint gonna upload to my page.. u got a place i can send when it's done so u can check it?
In a bit man
WKS
p.s - if u wanna see what he's like, check this:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/153599
on Sitck Ya Tongue Out - Do the Miley by wccm
on LET ME DANCE WITH YOU by beerling1970
cheers