Thx. I think you do good. I was just sayin melodies r the key . Really thats all. I would be more than happy to do something with you. U do the beat and Ill do the melody
Thats cool thx for taking you time to listen. The song Chemistry my sister is doing the hook I made 10 bars hooks and 12 bar verses so thats why its like it is for that reason. and you can tell when the hook is bout to come in cause I used wind chimes and took the guitar and strings away and used a complete different pad sound
iightt, i agree with J1K, it does have really nice melodies. It does need a little something to make it great though, dont get me wrong it all works very well together, and it a really good beat. Much better than anything ive made sofarr(wait a month;D,,im always improvinng)..Another thing is it doesnt seem to have clear verse and chorus sections, just a looping sound--but i guess the vocals would eliminate that...
All in all, beautiful track, just needs subtle improvements...good stuff keep iit upp haha
good trackk, some really nice melodies in there. What i might do to improve it is at 0:45 there is a small little drop off where the loops stop. Bring in stronger drums and maybe a new sound. It could do wonderrrs. Listen to Wale's The Problem for an example of what im saying..
But i really do like the track, just trying to help you improve itt
As I just wrote to John, ive put vox on it and it changed the feel of the track significantly (for the better). So lets hope i get permission to post that :p
this is a very well produced song, regardless if you made your own sounds or not. i just used it to record a pella, so i kinda wanted to show some love loll,,but keep it up, i dig this
the vocals are to quiet, and also need to be compressed, or cleaned up in some way, other than that the rap itself is iight, but its an iight track, oo and the beat melody needs to change somewhere or sometime, its too repitive,
but dont get the wrong idea, its a decent track, just always keep trying to get better and always stay focused
it has potential, and so do you if your still learning. My biggest flaw of the song is that it really doesnt have a theme, its kinda all over the place, another thing is the stops seems slow, like the beat stops, and comes back too late. the only other thing is that the piano/synth seemed a little high and the verse seemed a little empty. And im not trying to bring you down im just showing ways you could imporve, but it has potential
its iight, i like it to an extent. it has this feeling like your waiting for the beat to drop and it just kinda-doesnt. thats just my opinion tho, other than that nice track,
the rhymes are better than a lot of people on here, the beat is nice, good flow seems like its pretty well timed. check my stuff if u wanna, tell me if u wanna collab idk
this is my favorite by you, but all your tracks have this wierd vocal tone to them, idk how to describe it-but and i put lyrics on a shot at the moon but ive gotten bad reviews haha
haha yea I thot when I did that wit my voice it sounded so much better than what I tryed when I first started... if you wanna hear tha first song I ever recorded I could send it to ya but it is the most raw, and horribly crappy sound quality that I have
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All in all, beautiful track, just needs subtle improvements...good stuff keep iit upp haha
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But i really do like the track, just trying to help you improve itt
your improve suggestions are always wellcome!
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the vocals are to quiet, and also need to be compressed, or cleaned up in some way, other than that the rap itself is iight, but its an iight track, oo and the beat melody needs to change somewhere or sometime, its too repitive,
but dont get the wrong idea, its a decent track, just always keep trying to get better and always stay focused
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