Hello, lovely text!! And also beautiful singing. The song has a wonderful drive. The transition at around 1:10, however, doesn't quite appeal to me. Maybe something could have been done better with the drums there. As it is now, it sounds a bit "stuck on" to me. But maybe my earpads are acting up. Smile Great song! Best wishes, Manuela
Hello, what a fantastic song with a wonderful drive! The vocals are excellent, and the music is well-structured, with a light funk feel and an impressive expressiveness. The solo instruments are well-chosen and skillfully used. I really like it, especially because the mix is absolutely balanced. Furthermore, the entire song is highly engaging and danceable.
Well done! Warm regards and have a great weekend, Manuela
thank you so much for your wonderful feedback!
I'm truly happy that you enjoyed the song especially your kind words about the vocals, the structure, and the overall vibe mean a lot to me.
thanks again. !!
Hello Jean Marc, a beautiful approach to give the entire song a classical touch. Great work! Perhaps the mix (vocals) is a little too bright, but it's excellently arranged. I really like it!
Avec tout mon amour pour mon beau pays voisin, Manuela.
Thank you Manuela: yes the extract IA process change the voice. I made the mix with your track in ref but hard to go back to the original sound. I tried lot of tools. Mixing is a long term learning ;-)
Hello, I hope Mr. B has listened to this beautiful, melodic, and very emotional song? You performed the song wonderfully. Your singing is very sensitive and suits the lyrics perfectly.
Wat de tekst betreft, ik vind dat men realistische doelen moet stellen die men kan bereiken. Als je alleen maar dromen achterna rent, zul je uiteindelijk gefrustreerd achterblijven. Dromen zijn wensen die maar zelden helemaal uitkomen. Mr. B. is te jong om in een droomwereld te leven. Hij moet zijn weg vinden en deze stap voor stap bewandelen, dus van het ene haalbare punt naar het andere. Natuurlijk kun je daarbij droomvoorstellingen hebben en ook wensen, maar de realiteit bepaalt helaas ons handelen en leven. Succes heb je alleen als je binnen het bereikbare blijft! Hartelijke groeten, Manuela.
Hi little one.
Mister B was a little emotional.You know the situation.
And im totaly agree with you.
He needs to stay realistic.
Some dreams don't get you any further in life.
But in the situation he is in now, he desperately holds on to his dreams. I do try to make it clear to him that he can follow his dreams and I hope for him that he will one day succeed in realizing this dream, but that he also has to think about his life here and now. His dreams don't help him any further now. So do something that helps you now and work on your dreams in addition. So little one in that we think the same but mister B is hiding his feelings and sadness in to a world thats not realistic right know.
What he has been through has major consequences for now and also psychologically.My heart bleeds for him and i just can hope and help as far as i can so he can build his life again.
Hello Morash, great info with an explosive transition. The beat is well done, although the bass feels a bit too dominant to me, and the song seems to get caught in its own loop at some point. The ending is then a bit too abrupt for my taste. However, these are just my subjective impressions. Others certainly perceive it differently. Still, good work.
Best regards, Manuela
Hello Den, to me, this is a beautiful pop ballad! But no matter which category the song fits into, its a refreshing and lovely piece with a great melodic flow and a wonderful danceable rhythm that makes me dream of a vacation. Well done! Best regards, Manuela.
Hi Mom, I absolutely love this song! Youve created such a wonderful rhythm with your beat, and your singing is stunning. Im so happy that I got to be part of a song with you. You did an amazing jobthis song is a hit for me!
Sending love, your little one.
Well, the song doesnt exactly sound like a joke smile. I think it's a pretty intense story you're revealing to us here. Premium trap rap at its finest! Well done, beautifully arranged, skillfully mixed, and expertly mastered. I thoroughly enjoyed it! Best regards, Manuela
Thank you, Manuela! The story behind it was a spontaneous moment with friends that turned into something more real than expected. I tried to stay true to the story of it while shaping it with intention. Glad u liked it!
Appreciate you taking the time to listen and share your thoughts.
Well, I cant find anything amateurish here, apart from the frequency distribution already mentioned. However, theres definitely a lack of basslines and sub-bass. I also agree with 'makingbeats4me,' who pointed out introducing the drop with a break around 2:10. By that, I mean building up tension to lead into an energetic finale. Just tweak a few more things here and there, and youve got it!
I can largely agree with the opinions shared by my predecessors. Perhaps its a bit overdriven regarding the dominance of the bass, and the ending feels a bit abrupt to me. However, this is just my subjective perceptionothers might see it completely differently. Great work, and wishing you a Happy Easter, Manuela!
Thanx little one. I must say that the guitar and voice of bananalu didd make it so easy for me .I just can hope he will make more of this kind and we can sing together
Beautiful pop song! Well done. What? At 40 years old, you already want to give up *smile. We're the same age then. Best wishes and happy Easter, Manuela.
I can completely understand that sometimes it takes multiple attempts to realize one's own vision. We're no differentwe've experienced the same. You're absolutely right that occasionally, you need to pull the ripcord and attempt a fresh start before things get out of hand. We've had to do that ourselves many times. I also believe it's much more difficult to stick to your own line of creativity when producing alone. You're always dependent on feedback from others, to whom you occasionally present the song. If you have a band or other musicians involved in the production, there's a lot of discussion during the songwriting process, and you already start hearing other opinions. The opinions of colleagues can sometimes be blunt and unfiltered.
What I want to say is that I tip my hat to your work, and I truly believe you've done an excellent job. The music is balanced, lively, and melodious. As Kay also mentioned, "a very polished disco composition that would bring any club to life." Once again, fantastic work! Kind regards, Manuela
Absolutely fascinating and well-executed work. I like it! On one hand, it has something trance-like, and on the other, something driving that somehow pushes you forward. Well-crafted electro sound for a club visit. Best regards, Manuela
Thank you Manuela - I kind of like the groove but it was a task getting it roll as it does - that lovely vocal actually works well as a 'club' banger. It wasnt what I thought I would do but I started playing with the (air's) vacuum pro synth and (arturia's) mini freak and this layered synth trance electro kind of track eveloved. Thanks so much for the vox and even more for the warm feedback.
Hello, Great work! Wonderful music to chill out to and to party with. Well doneexcellent job on the arrangement, mixing, and mastering! Best regards, Manuela
Hello Kay, wonderful production. But that's exactly what I've come to expect from you *smile. With your amazing voice and expressive talent, you can truly sing anything! I'm not just saying thisI genuinely mean it. The lyrics are excellently written. I can absolutely relate to this "too much in my head." A beautiful blues piece! I think blues is perfectly suited to this topic. Compliments also go to Oli here (Im assuming hes part of this outstanding production). All in all, this is a favorite of mine. Best regards, Manuela.
Oli is the Elton to my Bernie ;) The application of his vision with his stellar flair with my lyrics and emotion just seems to work...Somehow! thank you so much for having a full listen and taking time to feedback, that means a lot to us ;) Yes we do Easter so Frohliche Oster zu Ihnen Alle
Fantastic song youve created! What makes me especially happy is that you incorporated Angelicas music and didnt focus solely on the vocals. Nevertheless, you managed not just to expand the song, but to give it a distinctive touch through your incredibly heartfelt interpretation. Moreover, by adding your instruments and effects, and creating a structure that builds from the beginning to the end, youve crafted a beautiful arc of suspense. Wonderfully done. I also really liked how you blended the lead vocals with the ad-libs towards the end. It creates a very captivating and stunning finale. Hats off to you! Warm regards, Manuela.
Fantastic ! I am so glad you liked what I have tried with your music. I really wanted to blend my ideas with yours to a result that would be accepted or even more, liked. Thank you for your thoughtful comment, I really do appreciate it.
Best wishes, Anthony
Hi Frans, I didn't know there were rules in music, *smile*. But let's be honest: creativity should always take precedence over limitations in music. That's why I view rules, often established by experts, with a certain amount of skepticism and criticism. In fact, I also find it quite problematic to pigeonhole music.
I see things a little differently when it comes to lyrics, though. Lyrics should be neither morally offensive nor offensive.
With this song, you've once again delivered an incredibly interesting piece of work and clearly demonstrated that it's entirely possible to integrate vocals into different musical styles without diminishing their power or meaning. The particularly versatile key of Am that we used speaks for this, of course, and above all, your exceptional skill, perfectionism, and expertise as a music producer.
Hi Manuela, thank you for your encouraging words and compliments. We, the people here at Looperman, can consider ourselves lucky that we were able to work on your beautiful track.
Send me a pm via Looperman if you want to receive the Reaper project as a gift.
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Well done! Warm regards and have a great weekend, Manuela
thank you so much for your wonderful feedback!
I'm truly happy that you enjoyed the song especially your kind words about the vocals, the structure, and the overall vibe mean a lot to me.
thanks again. !!
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Avec tout mon amour pour mon beau pays voisin, Manuela.
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Zivjeli,
VICTORIA
on Geef je dromen niet op dont give up your dreams by RitajustRita
Wat de tekst betreft, ik vind dat men realistische doelen moet stellen die men kan bereiken. Als je alleen maar dromen achterna rent, zul je uiteindelijk gefrustreerd achterblijven. Dromen zijn wensen die maar zelden helemaal uitkomen. Mr. B. is te jong om in een droomwereld te leven. Hij moet zijn weg vinden en deze stap voor stap bewandelen, dus van het ene haalbare punt naar het andere. Natuurlijk kun je daarbij droomvoorstellingen hebben en ook wensen, maar de realiteit bepaalt helaas ons handelen en leven. Succes heb je alleen als je binnen het bereikbare blijft! Hartelijke groeten, Manuela.
Mister B was a little emotional.You know the situation.
And im totaly agree with you.
He needs to stay realistic.
Some dreams don't get you any further in life.
But in the situation he is in now, he desperately holds on to his dreams. I do try to make it clear to him that he can follow his dreams and I hope for him that he will one day succeed in realizing this dream, but that he also has to think about his life here and now. His dreams don't help him any further now. So do something that helps you now and work on your dreams in addition. So little one in that we think the same but mister B is hiding his feelings and sadness in to a world thats not realistic right know.
What he has been through has major consequences for now and also psychologically.My heart bleeds for him and i just can hope and help as far as i can so he can build his life again.
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VICTORIA
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Best regards, Manuela
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Sending love, your little one.
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Appreciate you taking the time to listen and share your thoughts.
Safety,
ZE7DD
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Best regards, Manuela
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What I want to say is that I tip my hat to your work, and I truly believe you've done an excellent job. The music is balanced, lively, and melodious. As Kay also mentioned, "a very polished disco composition that would bring any club to life." Once again, fantastic work! Kind regards, Manuela
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Best wishes, Anthony
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I see things a little differently when it comes to lyrics, though. Lyrics should be neither morally offensive nor offensive.
With this song, you've once again delivered an incredibly interesting piece of work and clearly demonstrated that it's entirely possible to integrate vocals into different musical styles without diminishing their power or meaning. The particularly versatile key of Am that we used speaks for this, of course, and above all, your exceptional skill, perfectionism, and expertise as a music producer.
Wonderful work! Best regards, Manuela
Send me a pm via Looperman if you want to receive the Reaper project as a gift.
Again thanks and best regards, Frans