nice job on the music side of this track, as for the vocals.... well... you can defenitly do better. if the vocals were removd, or at least the longer drawn out parts, it would make for an excelent track. you can probably even keep the vocals in, just distort them so they, and i don't want to offend anyone, sound like a hoarse cow moo. there are plug-ins in the waves diamond package, if this is in your budget.
this song sounds great, why such a silly name? i do think you need to mix the tracks better to normalize the kik drum a bit towards the middle to end of the song, it really gets loud there. the synth also seems to get louder in some areas of the song than others. fix the levels and touch up some things here and there and this track would kik @$$.
on Fly in to the future by JohnnySounds
6/10 with vocals
8/10 without
on End of the Story by typeMARS
8/10
on Beyond the Planets by typeMARS
9/10
on Happy Slapping by remko22
8/10