FearlessWretch

I thought of two teens boy/girl hanging out together feeling awkward in the big city in the park going on near dark..
But thats just me. Thought it was nice and.
you know the rest : )

Hey you can play this on the radio hehehe.
Coz its good yay!

Cool! thats a hot track

YEAH! YEAH! YEAH! YEAH! Tight track Mic Rrap RIPs smooth
and Malicious.
Favd

@fixxxer's
Way to go man. when I first heard the vocals I was thinking damn needs more of a beat to kill with but. As I kept listening it all started to make sense.
A different style and you were right a simple but effect approach was best.
Awesome!

Wow! It was like you were explaining my life as it transitions from 1 moment to another : )

Awesome.
Loved it

@BlackKasper's

For real. IT made me think of going on dark when the day is in the middle of going from day into night.
I imagined myself sitting on the porch looking at the stars
sitting in a nice chair.
I didnt think it neede any vocals to be honest and was glad not to hear any as it would of spoiled my mood.
Great song.
Loved it

Wayne

Awesome! Really was taken back by this track.
Smoooth drum transitions and Heavyguitar tracks.
Thats some serious oompa loompa work music lol..
Loved it
Favd.

Wayne

@Zappo

Great level of musicianship!
Beautiful transitions.
Great compositon.
Truly awesome : )

I lkD it. Original and easy 2 listen at.
Good work.

Cool!
Real technical ande clean.
Well produced and composed.

Keep it up UP!

Nice! thats a good mix. cant wait till i can mix like that and then sum..

Sup!
Where did you get the piano? sounds sweeeet man. And the kick and snare, yeah. Mega Omph!
Nice style and smooth melodies..

yeah! you should give me some tips on how to master. Coz that sounz Pro^

Oh! This one baddass Track man!

@Dv8

You still got it!!
Cool as...

@BCBEAT06

way cool track. Smooth fluent and tight!!!
Well done.

Solid Music.. Me likey

Cool! i think i get what you were trying to do. its Awesome. I think when the snare is doing that roll for about 8bars i think it needs to be more powerful. I like it... Ki^

@RayLoU,


Good work. I think the mix fitts good.Real heavy riffs. I think tha Trick is, to make evryone feel the music the way weed does ^)

you made that with fruity loops?. That was cool as. Good work 8/10

Nice!!! Made me wanna dance. Electrical spasms in ma head^)
Keep it poppin Yeah!!!

Nice! Quality 10

@Kibbs's. I like this song. I think its has that teen freedom feel 2it. and that life from your point of view is how your music is. beautiful. I think you have to play along with a metronome or a click just to rythm steady. It kinda goes off time here and there. so i found it really hard to put a drum track to. So I didnt. simply it wouldve ruined what you do have already. Hope no hard feelings and only encouragement is what I aim to send. All the best

:^) Burnout

Yeah!!! Love dis track. Ruggedz!

I feel dat is Badass!