Haha your funny man, you do not know hip hop at all. If i were to practice and rehearse it, it would not be a freestyle at all. It would be another "Fake" freestyle with me reading off a blackberry. Your words are better suited for a actual "song". To each his own, good looking on atleast tryin to listen.
the music is really nice - could use some tweaking but at same time the lyrics are like so way out there - slow it down some get organized with the flow you laying down. You can't just jump up in everywhere and expect it be be right.
sorry man. alot of my songs need to be described in tags, not one particular genre. the drums were the most house part of it. also, it may have been how the disc got burned. When i burned the disc, it sounded different from the orignal quality. Would u suggest adding more synth pads to it perhaps? that may help in giving it the more warm feel.
why does this track sound like a phone is ringing in it?
It really throws things off to me but I guess I can deal with it.
I don't know how this would get you any romance from any female.
The high pitch vocal seems annoying after a few seconds.
compared with the "so called" rapping that seems like rapping one minute and reading the next.
on Gone Shootin by Matteblak
on 2wiCe MiKe by NuTTy2uNes
on The End before the Beginning by Cybertooth
keep at it
thanks
on Chill with me by Becca
You have not lost your touch yet.
on Untitled (in progress) by hiphoppriesthood
Thanks for this
on Real Hiphop by K1Clean
if you going to freestyle at least practice before you lay it down.
another beat won't save this at all.
practice makes perfect get comfortable with your material
then go for what you know.
rambling on and on isn't a showcase here
on Just that cold ft sin by TreP
But this is a lot better than much of the commercial stuff going on the real radio today.
Keep at it and you will be in the big time.
on Spread The Virus Drumstep 2011 by Alen9R
good work here
Alen
on Love and Joy by Metrodox
The vocals need a bit of tweaking but I see where you are heading with this track.
on deep funky by smallpaul
I wouldn't change a thing.
on f the feds by Ryoty
on Higher by killahmonk
I guess people can rap on just about anything these days.
but I would think this needs a bit more work.
on Commanded by God by MTalsi
megga props to you and your style
on POWER by lostcause25
thanks for this
on Nun 2 Do by SmokeE
there needs to be a bit more work to change it up some to give it more style.
But I can see where someone would want to run with it as it is.
Thanks for this
on SHORTY A BLESSING by WMS
yeah this is a lot better than most of the hip hop that I run into outside of looperman.
Keep up the work
( LET THE MUSIC PLAY )....ALL DAY FOR 2011/ Thanks duke .
on OK by djobe
The beat is strong and the flow is awesome.
on addiction - slow pearls remix by michao
so now you can't find the person.
This is an awesome track tho none the less.
on Dawntreader ( retouch) by sn76
Its so slammin my system.
Thanks for the download gonna be playin this a lot.
keep em comin for me.
on The start of something new (intro) by JimeVonLoops
where is the warmth?
on Whatever feat George Bush and TruSki by djquickrick
just to think I put this prez behind me and now here we go again
on Moodier Moods and Other Feelings by charliebaltimore
Thanks for this one
on Twin Galaxies by Nequissimus
good stuff here
on Secret Lovers ft Dont trip by notebookwarior
It really throws things off to me but I guess I can deal with it.
I don't know how this would get you any romance from any female.
The high pitch vocal seems annoying after a few seconds.
compared with the "so called" rapping that seems like rapping one minute and reading the next.
get it together.
thanks
on RISE IT UP LIKE THE SUN by lostcause25
the vocal work is a bit on the soft side like is background vocals waiting for some lead vocals to kick in.