phasenwandler

great track. i don't share your opinion it would sound better with female vocals. think it's fine as it is. your voice reminds me to dj shah - tides of time (maybe i'm completely wrong, cause i haven't heared that track for a whole bunch of years, but i think your vocals sound similar - just was the first thing that came into my mind, when i listened to your track). it would be quite amazing, if you could add some spoken vocals by any child, saying something impressive. imagine something like michael jackson's heal the world - the little girl talking at the beginning. something like that would fit perfectly into the break at 2:30, i think. you did a good job here at all.

great stuff. maybe got the same impression as mhyst. this track makes me feel a little uncomfortable but in a comfortable way somehow (if this makes any sense. don't know how to describe better). the first thing that came into my mind, listening to your track, was deliriium - silence. sounds quite similar (not in a negative way) to me.

not sure, but it sounds like you are using loops. the track begins too suddenly, better build it up slowly. even though the track lasts only 2 minutes, it's getting a little boring at the end, cause everything just repeats. add more tension by changing the lead melody just a little, use filters to vary the sound. use more elements in the drum section, crashes, cymbals, snare rolls are always fine to combine different parts. maybe listen to some tracks, you like, and try to reproduce them, this could help a lot. or open some sample tracks in your daw and study the arrangement. the melody and sounds you are using are fine, only a straight line is lacking in your track. hope i could give some hints ;-)