dude eff the hate. i ant from the projects, but the heart in this song is deep. it cuts at ya man. this track is was mad awesome. forget any one who tells you that you need to change. the beat was phat and had an old school style. got me think of too short or tupac. mixed with that soothing singing voice. the chorus was sick, it may not of head alot of variety, but it blended so well with the music. dude that was straight maddness man. 10/10 for get the haters man
Thank you so much for the feedback...The words and the meaning for this song..really came from my everyday life..and what i was feeling..Thank you so much for listening..
dude i know i did this song already, but i have it on my phone and i been jamming it for a few days and i feel that i need to tell ya something man. your voice mixed with those autotunes for some reason remind me of tool. it is soothing and new man. dude you may not like tool. not many people do, but i love em. one of my fav all time bands. so in my bok this huge
dude my man. this is awesome you got mad skilss to mix a bunch of diffrent raps like that. dude this is my all time fav track. i could feel the respect. all these dude go some mad skills. looks like i a miles behind. wow man dude that was the perfect track. just perfect. you got mad mixing skills brah..
dude man this is a awesome track, gotta love the flow. there is a real deep message. and you have most awesome voice man. dude killer track.. deep trach from the heart. that alone is how you make heart man 10/10
haha dude you so could be a one man band. haha you mix metal very well with other styles out there. to me the voice is a bit quite.. you have a good one so id higher the sound slighty. but thats just the way id would of done it. if only i had your skills man. yet another great track
yo man thanx for the for the review, im a metal fan but i enjoy all types of music really, just trying to find my own sound so im trying out some different things, and i think i like where im at now, i just need to work on vox like you kinda said.
i am going to be blunt. B@d@ss man. dude thats a fat beat. i could picture smashing on devil may cry to this man. i liked how in blend with th diffrent styles pretty well. or you could watch the ending to final fansty advent children to this. when cloud kick some @ss.
the beat blend very well. it sound like you heavy like metal style mixed in there as well. freaking dope. i wish i had the insight how to imporve this track, but in reality to me its perfect..
haha thanks i was going for a hardcore intense sound. kinda depresses me though that only the drum beat and the break down were original, everything else was taken from samples, and im pretty big on using my own material. but im very glad you were able to take some time out to listen and review, truly means alot to me :)
omg it would be a dream to rap to a song with this kind of flow. wow this reminds me of driveing trucks. dude my eyes are watery. i dont know if its becuz the smoke from my cig is filling the room our your moving track. but id have to say tis your track my man.. wow just effin wow. not a thing i would change
not my style of music but has a good beat brah. i also liked the vocals. i have that guys vocals downloaded my self... it has a smooth flow for real. i would put a bit more of his vocals in here though. any who brah.. nice track : ) lol 9/10 brah solid
more bass would open this track right up with a tad bit more vocals.. but in the end blending darn near perfection mang
haha dude it was mad short. autotunes is bad unles mixed with a voice like yours. id say you have brought autotunes back to life man. the wrods are pretty sweet to man. 10/10 brah. effin jamtastic
dude man you need to throw in some words man. jamming that sh!t. dude this was awesome track. sounds like what i use to listen to back in high school when i was a rocking teen ahaha. dude thanks for the flash back bro. real heavy axeness and great flow haha. 10/10 you put some vocals to that it would be an 11 out of 10 man
wow your new and miles ahead of me. for real man i thought you were pro by hearing this beat. simply wow. i bet your a fast learner. i have been trying to mix beats for 4 months and i still cant mix one track.. haha. the flow of the track was perfect. i know there was no singing in it, i kinda heard a voice to it as if i could see some one jaming to this haha solid man 10/10
yo Luckyfeather thanx. i don't belief i'm miles ahead of you bro...lol,,,
i'm just a hiphop fan like y'all... and i do what my hard tells me... :)
God bless ya
haha i love this. very sweet flow. good meaning behind those nice words. haha the music was perfect man. haha i love it. cali life man thats the way brah. haha stay strong my brah 10 out of 10
dude hmm i am in kinda awe. i am not a fine of metal two much and the music fills a bit mashed, but bro did more than i ever could. and you blended this track very well, i am rather new to the DJ mixing thing, but i would not change thing, maybe add a bit of delay in some of the vocals. so the bounce frome speaker to speaker. 9 out of 10. brah. goos stuff
thank you means alot, im actually thinking of adding a few more verses and possibly a lead guitar upon listening to it, but thank you so much for the time to listen and review, also thank you for the advice, ill be sure to incorporate that, as far as being new to the group, i wish you the best of luck!
dude.. i am a wanna be rapper and since i been on this site for only this last week. i have heard many rappers that put my work to Sh!t. great flow. wild and deep words. very smart and real. bro you out class me in every since of the word. a great and solid job. 10/10. ill skim your work but this one blew my mind
Thanks dude. No worries this was my 2nd ever rap song ever. I've got a LONG way to go. Some things which help with lyrics, check out programs VERSE PERFECT and RHYME, they help a lot with style and sometimes words that late at night just don't come naturally. Keep up the sound stuff yourself!
wow....... just wow. i have not clue what to say. i am at a loss for words. the chants were also very moving.. and mixed so well. the flow was peerless. great freaking work.. sounds simply awesome
hahaha you bring s a new style. to rock. autotunes is rarely used in rock. and if done with a good voice like yours it sounds pretty awesome. nice job brah. there is not one thing i would change about this song.. simply perfect 10/10 .. great work man
dude. haha i swear we have had to have the same ex. lol i feel that way lol. your voice was pretty good... what i think you should do is sing it aging softly.. and add it in as back ground vocals. other than that bra. this track was among perfection. deepness from the heart. simply art 10 out of 10 man
thanks for the advice, and maybe we did have the same ex lol mine was a total b**** and cheated on me a bunch of times, she would seduce me with sex to get me back and it would always work. Its good to know i relate to someone with my music :)
these are superb mate! I'd love it if you could hit me up with those! Very well written. The only line I don't like is the "bottom of the bottle of wine" if you could change that..I'm just not crazy about that in there..kinda kills the mood in my opinion.
So yeah just hit me up when you got em ya?
well i am i don't know what you were aiming for with this song, but to me i got this deep urge to write some lines down. it really is an amazing song. haha really deep. music is a crazy thing. to you this could mean something so different that how it makes me feel. the songs flow was better than any i could manage and beyond my dreams. this was an amazing track. the flow was what was the most shocking. in all honesty id love to rap to it : ) haha. great work. i really wanna peer through you work now ahaha
Yeah? well cool man!! thats great! if you wanna write/rap something and hit me up with it that'd be amazing! I think some lyrics could really make it.
wow thanks so much for all you said bro! it means a lot to me mate!
Cause I love the drum beat so much I was gonna do a Hip Hop remix that was more Synthy...but it could b really unique to rap on this so just le me know ya?
cool!
haha :D keep rollin' it Doughster :D
dude.. i gave this song a listen not reading your info haha. so it came to quite a shock to me, but in all honesty i liked it. not my cup of tea, however it was belnded so well that it was simply epic. there are not many other words to call it. dude i really could see myself jaming to this man. this was easy 10 out of 10. you did this with only a year under your belt. that is just awesome bro. Keep up the amazing jams brah
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the beat blend very well. it sound like you heavy like metal style mixed in there as well. freaking dope. i wish i had the insight how to imporve this track, but in reality to me its perfect..
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more bass would open this track right up with a tad bit more vocals.. but in the end blending darn near perfection mang
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The sun rising at my feet
Tonight, it will set to my back
I walk along this tiresome street
My life under this lonely attack
Alone, alone I walk
The darkness stalks
Around ever corner
Only to turn ya
Leaving nothing but these weeping blues
And the chaos ensues
But I step and step once more to pay my dues
Feeling the glaring eyes
Peering into this chest of mine
Each day I slowly die
All I want to see is the bottom of this bottle of wine
alone, alone I talk
But there eyes mock
There is no other owner
To my crying soul
Leaving nothing but these weeping blues
And the chaos ensues
But I step and step once more to pay my dues
uhhh thats what i got. any way thats kinda how this track made me kinda feel.. any who once again. awesome song dude ahaha 10 out of 10
So yeah just hit me up when you got em ya?
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wow thanks so much for all you said bro! it means a lot to me mate!
Cause I love the drum beat so much I was gonna do a Hip Hop remix that was more Synthy...but it could b really unique to rap on this so just le me know ya?
cool!
haha :D keep rollin' it Doughster :D
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