I like this, ...., It's dark and twisted, I would love to do a remix of this, if you would be so kind as to let me have the stems I could cook them up into something delicious, like special brownies :-)
hahaha well i'd be honored to give you the stems. would love to hear what someone could do with this. although i've never given stems to someone before..how would i get by doing that? would audio bounces of each track be sufficient? lol forgive my ignorance.
really sweet vibe!!!definitely summer house vibe. I really dig the percussive synth about 2:17 into the track. I'm not sure why you would need to set a "mature content" warning tho.
I love the glitchy vocals!!!! personally tho I think your brilliant voice over powers the beat a little too much, I feel as the the beat is "weak" and I'm sure it is because your voice is the loudest thing in the entire track. Don't get me wrong you have a great voice, but i think who ever did the final mix-down before the mastering process should have considered that. Even the Rap verse is louder then the beat. Finding the balance with all the sound levels is always the toughest part of any production. At least in my experience. In any case for a "pop" song it is quite tolerable... I normally dislike anything mainstreamish.
I have to be honest here... I almost didn't make it all the way to the end of this track. I'm curious as to what software you use, other then Audacity. In any case this track made me feel like i was experiencing the worst DJ set in the world!!! please fix the timing on the "loops" that you used. Also I recommend that you look for some torrents of sequencing software (or figure out the math to timing without sequencers). Furthermore, I agree with Bear... It is wonderful that you are starting out so young. I got started on production when I was about 16, all i had was Sound Forge. Which is a great sound manipulation software but not a sequencer, which means that at first all my sequencing was done in "copy paste" format.
Thanks for listening, I'm glad of all the nice long reviews I receive because they give lot's of advice. Me as well I've not started with a sequencer but I've heard of them. Anyway I only use audacity, I've heard of Fl Studio but I've not yet tried it. I've also recently been practicing putting 2 or 3 beats together nicely so as to improve future songs.
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I like this it has a lovely vibe the whole way through, but in all honesty the ending is kind of rude, as oppose to smooth, I felt i was slap out of a lovely dream, instead of being gently let out of the dream.
It sounds a bit Like Old-school House music, specially that groove about 30 seconds into it. I dig it, it is a sweet groove, But I agree with "numberjack" on the placement. Definitely a good track, your choice of drum sounds even the grooves and the synths are all really good but not Drum N Bass.
Ps:... I always listen to songs more then 3 times in a row when i review them.
WOW!!!!!! This is one inspiring piece of music!!!! Really makes me want to jump around and dance!!!!! I agree with numberjack... You got this down!!!! when you bring out the final version if i could download it I have a DJ friend of mine that plays Dub Step and Drum N Bass on south beach every 5th Monday of the month, I'm sure he would love to play this track. This quality of Drum N Bass is rare and far between. I'm in love with this song!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!
I think this track has a lot of potential. I really like the vocals (i would love to have a copy of that acapella), and the synths you have going on. However, the bass drowns everything else at times, and the drum pattern does not seem to progress from the intro pattern. Personally, when i write Drum N Bass, I like to use really snappy Snares. I feel that the snare you chose would be better for some house music or something not so epic... Like i said before this track has the potential to be a very powerful DNB track, I can see where you wanted to go with it, but your not there yet... Please continue to work it.
PS: Please do not be offended, this is my honest constructive criticism :-D
I second that emotion!!!! This track is not so much wired as it is different in a unique sort of way!!! Epic in a similar way to "the Secret to immortality"
It sounds more like Jungle then break beat to my ear, with a little happy hardcore influence, and a total disregard for it's own harmony. Interesting song. ::Thumbs Up::-D
WOW That is one Epic track!!!!! I love that shuffle in the beat!!!! Very well spent 7 minutes and 48 seconds... The only thing i feel obligated to address is at the end... : this vibe is too beautiful... too epic... too uplifting to fade it out so abruptly (i was left feeling like the end of the story was not fully told). I suggest removing the elements one by one until you are left with the bass and the strings, and finally just the strings, then you can fade out. These are my creative offerings take it or leave it i will not be offended. I love what you did here.
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