The instrumental is okay. But however the vocals are a little off flow to say the least. But it seems to only be in a state of beta so I'll give it ample time I suppose.
Excellent!! lovely job. But One thing I feel as if you need to alter slightly is the tonal value. It sounds a little to quite.
Other than that, Awesome, can't wait to hear what you will do with mine :)
You could use a little work on some of the transitions but it sounds rather good. I really like how you used that rising sounds effect, where did you find that?
hey thanks for the listen. I appreciate your feedback! I am a big fan of vocal drops and I use them alot in my transitions something diffrent but sometimes the timing can be adjusted, thanks for the suggestion! As far as the build goes I have it layered the high pitched sound I use is a simple synth sound with 3xosc that I adjust so the pitch glides up, theres a technique in piano roll you need to use for that to work. I also used the vocal and another sample from looperman for the build, so I am not sure which aspect you are referring to, I also encourage you to look forward to my new mix of the track that I am finishing up!!
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Other than that, Awesome, can't wait to hear what you will do with mine :)
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I've actually got half of the lyrics written out for your track =)
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