So, me again. you didn't "screamed" the mic away as I told you. so i can't see any development in here. sry.
And listenable was a good word to describe this stuff here. youre just 14 so it's okey, if i think how i played e.g. guitar with 14 years, satan better should have eat my soul. but now it's better and listenable i hope. :P
So if you wanna make me a faviour, just delete this itunes crap in your profile. from the nearly 300k loopermans here are probably 20 at itunes? ;D
so you're young and do a good start. but maybe you just ask someone (the best would be such a singing teacher at a musicschool) for help. and you will see, it will become better. :)
and jus forget biber and co. these are musical sacrifices of commerce... not real, and they do a bullsh*t which they call music.
mmh, you told me to check out your other tracks, what a pity i was to lazy to do it before... maaan you make so great stuff here. cause of the guitar i like this track very much, you've a fantastic hand for melodies, phrasing (even it is midi) and feeling. soo much feeling. this is awesome!
really, it a big bullsh*t with your hand, but the music you write here is very very high quality either.
gimme moooore! :)
Thanks for listening to The Bullfighter,I am very glad you like the track and your remarks about playing midi on the keyboard.I used to play guitar amongst other Instruments and I find with a touch responsive keyboard you can get a very close feel to the real thing, depending on the Synth software you are using, along of course with 35 years experience, playing different instruments live on
stage.Music is very addictive and lot of it comes from dedication and determination.The more you put in the more you get out.
Thanks again for your nice review.
Truegrit
Thanks for your Review of my track, New Beginning,glad you liked it .I hope you get to listen to some of my other tracks ,mostly Cinematic/classical.
Happy New Year.
Truegrit
bear told you everything important. ;)
the backings in your songs are really good, they're a really good base to develop your style.
what you've really to develop is your voice. don't be shy, "scream" into the mic, show your voice, don't hesistate, nobody we punish you for a nice tone, for a strong voice. thats the most important thing while singing, i think. ;)
oh sh*t, i'm really sorry dude! :D
so I can tell something about the guitar too, fine.
your style reminds me on a guitarist, yep i checked it right on youtube, david gilmoure. your sound is like davids guitar art. insane! :)
Wish i would play like you. :) I love this style.
lovely. :)
this is freakin great. sooo much feeling in there.
and an awesome guitar solo there. even if it isn't from you, but it is awesome. :D
faved.
I see... a large amount of tunes, feelings moods, all in one song taken from other songs...
This is a hard thing to do, very difficult to mix these together. you did a well job!
I don't know all of your tracks but some. it's minimalistic how you did but solid and it sounds great! :)
nice phrasing in the guitars btw!
That was great! your technics and tone is amazing! :)
I really enjoyed this more pleeaaaase.
but the next time please split it stereo cause the backing harms sometimes the solo. so a left right split could help.
and it sounds sometimes peaked? Am I right?
Ok I looked in your profile... I see. first line 6 is bullshit, I use it too... :D everytime I could set it afire. Second I also used Kristal in the beginnig cause it's so easy. but in the mixdown it cut's you very much brilliance. so better take audacity. there have also somethin like click and pop filters and so on.
Dunno maybe i've alzheimer disease. but this sound changed very much from the last time... woaah what a development.
Now I like it really much. It's a great track! :)
and the Rock on is sweet. =D
I have to make a review at least because of the title of this smoothy chilled song.
Coffee is great. and the arrangement is coffeelike.
genuis title for a very tasty composition.
wow. this is incredible. the sound, the vibes and waves and everythhing. the parts are simle but there are so many parts, such a volumen. this is a real reincarnation piece, awesome! :)
faved!.
Thank you very much. I've been 40 years in silence until I discovered that a computer could make music. Now I have 40 years of lyrics and melodies in my mind.
Stop crying like a baby for feedback, everybody get's some on this site, waiting is the key. ;)
so to be honest: it's not bad.
there are good things and some not so good things.
good is you've your style singing a song and a characteristic voice which isn't annoying.
but sometimes you lose power and whisper shy into the mic. then it's sometimes very nasal - doesn't sounds porfessional. ;)
then try to breath with your midriff it will sound more tension - will get an more exactly tone giving.
and try not to slide the tones from down to the tone you wanna sing.
also open your mouth bigger. the high tones starving from having no volumen.
and you always try to have this rough thing in your voice. stop that if you don't have it. ;) just sounds stupid.
I hope this will helps a bit.
my tip: go to a music school and take a half year singing lessons. will give you much more then we can say here. cause singing is a technique you have to learn. ;) (most people have to. :P )
and yes i'm a lazy guitarist, but i've to sing in our stupid school choire. so I know what im talking about. ;)
first seconds i thought on lady gaga... cause of your high but nice voice. and these pop beats in the drums. then some rap? i think so. yeah thats all usual pop stuff could come right out of the radio.
sometimes the melody lines in the instruments could be louder, right now they're not clear...
all in all the arrangement is nice but standard. another pop track for the community called world. ;) but it's ok, if you like your style as it is (it's also on a high level), then keep on doing! ;)
Thanks...we're still trying to work on converting from rnb and rap to some rock and pop...I think the more songs we do we should began to get better on making those type of songs
Nothing breaking new. just old stuff with a new image. but that's how it works... great piece of work here especially the one riff on minute 2... ;) tasty. :)
all in all it's a great tune to smoke a cigartte right know! :D
well first, this is not blues. :D pop genre will fit best i think.
second: awesoooooome! :) your voice is insane i wish someone who could sing like you and has the same spirit would live around here, so we could do something together...
really great, if you don't mind we could do a little collab together sometimes?
FIRST OF ALL: I am the WORST at trying to guess what genre is what, so that really helps. @__@ thanks.
SECOND: THANKS AGAIN! I actually would absolutely LOVE to collab, it's sort of the only way I can carry on as a musician, because i only write and sing, so collabs keep me afloat. get in touch! C:
on Gone by NamelessWarning
And listenable was a good word to describe this stuff here. youre just 14 so it's okey, if i think how i played e.g. guitar with 14 years, satan better should have eat my soul. but now it's better and listenable i hope. :P
So if you wanna make me a faviour, just delete this itunes crap in your profile. from the nearly 300k loopermans here are probably 20 at itunes? ;D
so you're young and do a good start. but maybe you just ask someone (the best would be such a singing teacher at a musicschool) for help. and you will see, it will become better. :)
and jus forget biber and co. these are musical sacrifices of commerce... not real, and they do a bullsh*t which they call music.
greetings. glocke.
and about the iTunes thing, yeah i don't know why i said that XD
on The Bullfighter by truegrit
really, it a big bullsh*t with your hand, but the music you write here is very very high quality either.
gimme moooore! :)
stage.Music is very addictive and lot of it comes from dedication and determination.The more you put in the more you get out.
Thanks again for your nice review.
Truegrit
on New Beginning by truegrit
wanna more from this stuff! :)
faved.
Happy New Year.
Truegrit
on Forsaken by Marius9
freakin melodies, really good riffery, sounds sometimes prog like and the choire is woooow. ;)
sometimes (especially solopart) the guitar is not exactly in time. but it's not sooo important. ;)
on Change For The Better by NamelessWarning
bear told you everything important. ;)
the backings in your songs are really good, they're a really good base to develop your style.
what you've really to develop is your voice. don't be shy, "scream" into the mic, show your voice, don't hesistate, nobody we punish you for a nice tone, for a strong voice. thats the most important thing while singing, i think. ;)
on Melodic Metal Snow Day 2 by JimmyLee
so I can tell something about the guitar too, fine.
your style reminds me on a guitarist, yep i checked it right on youtube, david gilmoure. your sound is like davids guitar art. insane! :)
Wish i would play like you. :) I love this style.
on We Are Trapped by LeftArmy
This was f*ckin awesome. I don't feel close to the digital music style blabla.
But i want definitely your album!.
on Melodic Metal Snow Day 2 by JimmyLee
this is freakin great. sooo much feeling in there.
and an awesome guitar solo there. even if it isn't from you, but it is awesome. :D
faved.
on And So Becomes by Diwey
it's a great fundament for a real good song!
keep on doing! :)
Thanks for the comment! ;-)
on Triumphant Finale by Express77
This is a hard thing to do, very difficult to mix these together. you did a well job!
I don't know all of your tracks but some. it's minimalistic how you did but solid and it sounds great! :)
nice phrasing in the guitars btw!
Rock on mate, great work here! :)
on The Zone by jfw
now I can get up... this is really well played. freakin groovy, music in front of the lord...
keep on doing! :)
Jamie.
on Blues Ballad by srv3089
I really enjoyed this more pleeaaaase.
but the next time please split it stereo cause the backing harms sometimes the solo. so a left right split could help.
and it sounds sometimes peaked? Am I right?
Ok I looked in your profile... I see. first line 6 is bullshit, I use it too... :D everytime I could set it afire. Second I also used Kristal in the beginnig cause it's so easy. but in the mixdown it cut's you very much brilliance. so better take audacity. there have also somethin like click and pop filters and so on.
but the song and you phrasing is wuaa great! :)
on latin flow rnb 2 by latinflow
wayne, keep on doing! :)
on Rock On by LarzCreative
Now I like it really much. It's a great track! :)
and the Rock on is sweet. =D
on Soundtrack(love theme) by Aereas
the melody is an catchy tune. :)
Maybe I will continue with this tune then ;)
Cheers
on Coffee speculations by sumper
Coffee is great. and the arrangement is coffeelike.
genuis title for a very tasty composition.
keep on doing! :)
on Divebomber by RAPREscENT
great work! :)
Keep on doing!
on Absolution to Ambience by Express77
great for the time 8.09 a.m.
it was a treat indeed, my friend!
on Waves by Sixfingermusic
faved!.
on Cuenta Conmigo by Vicen
It's a really well arranged jazz tune. you've got a hand for doing music even without playing an instrument!
it was a pleasure listen to it. :)
on STP CREEP (COVER) by wartooth
so to be honest: it's not bad.
there are good things and some not so good things.
good is you've your style singing a song and a characteristic voice which isn't annoying.
but sometimes you lose power and whisper shy into the mic. then it's sometimes very nasal - doesn't sounds porfessional. ;)
then try to breath with your midriff it will sound more tension - will get an more exactly tone giving.
and try not to slide the tones from down to the tone you wanna sing.
also open your mouth bigger. the high tones starving from having no volumen.
and you always try to have this rough thing in your voice. stop that if you don't have it. ;) just sounds stupid.
I hope this will helps a bit.
my tip: go to a music school and take a half year singing lessons. will give you much more then we can say here. cause singing is a technique you have to learn. ;) (most people have to. :P )
and yes i'm a lazy guitarist, but i've to sing in our stupid school choire. so I know what im talking about. ;)
on Paradise feat Kate Dilemma by NoMadDix
also the voice of course! :)
It feels a bit oriental and is a freakin nice chill music.
faved! :)
much appreciated
glad you enjoyed it
also check out resarection if you like chill out.
thanks again
Cy
on Hold On by N2G
sometimes the melody lines in the instruments could be louder, right now they're not clear...
all in all the arrangement is nice but standard. another pop track for the community called world. ;) but it's ok, if you like your style as it is (it's also on a high level), then keep on doing! ;)
on Under The Sea by majesty
all in all it's a great tune to smoke a cigartte right know! :D
on Let Me Down Easy by Naruko
second: awesoooooome! :) your voice is insane i wish someone who could sing like you and has the same spirit would live around here, so we could do something together...
really great, if you don't mind we could do a little collab together sometimes?
greetings glocke
SECOND: THANKS AGAIN! I actually would absolutely LOVE to collab, it's sort of the only way I can carry on as a musician, because i only write and sing, so collabs keep me afloat. get in touch! C: