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dude this is really fresh,i cant wait to hear the fninsh more mastered track,hmu if u wanna collab

im banging fat chicks!!!im banging fat chicks!!!!!lol new favriot jam

fresh ass gangsta shit homie keep this shit up

say homie ima try to spit somthing to this,il give u full credit and its for non commercial use,if u say otherwise let me know,and i wont upload,fresh beat man keep it up

dope ass beat,mind if i throw somthing on it?

or maybe il do the hook maybe that might sound better,idk man,all i gotta know is,the hook has to change somehow for this track to be a heavy hitter

my honest opinion man,and please dont take this wrongly,but the hook at the start of the song (still listening to it while commenting) is not good at all,vocals are to high,its obnoxious,n just honestly wack,in my opinion,now..with that said,ima have my girl do the hook n show u how it sounds see if u like it better,again dont be offended home boi just give u my musical advise,the lyrics are on point the verse is straight on point,i like it,and i want to see more of it,il hit u up sometime when i got it

fresh track man,but my personal opinion the way u have ur vocals panning from left speaker to right(left ear bud to right in my case) kinda threw it off,other then that,good vocal quality and lyrics man

yo the bass is real fresh on this track man,and so is the beat its self,good stuff man good stuff

sounds really fresh to by the way major props

so man,ima see if i can try n write somthing for this,il let u know if i do

honestly not my style of music,but it sounds professional

i personaly dont like the way u recorded ur voice,the effects,idk man,but thats just my opinion,if it is an effect,mess around with other options like maybe double recording or diffrent effects man

yo man,this sounds b.a the bass especially but there are a couple of things i diddnt like personally,1. u cnt download man,i wanna hop on this track...now that i listen to the beat longer,i like everything about it,i was gonna say somthing about the melody,but i like that now..i guess some little things maybe could be do withouth,but ya,one love man,

well nvm,i cnt download it,f*%@

yo man im defintly gonna use this if u dnt mind,fresh

some pretty thro beat man and even freshier lyrics keep doin good homie

the scratching could use some work at the begining,but the track it self and the lyrics beat and all are fresh man,keep doin good homie u got the voice

could use some work homie,but for the most part thats fresssss as hell,died during surgery,fresh man fresh