I'm first to comment, but I'm sure I won't be the last...this is a great track...I love the chime synth in the intro. When it gets grimy and dirty its a bit of a surprise lol...but I like it. Its the kind of track I need to hear playing loud in the Purple Turtle at 2 or 3 in the morning!
It's a sign of a good track that I had to scroll and scroll down to add my comment lol.
I certainly enjoyed listening to this. I love your vocals and was a bit disappointed to go to your profile and not find any acappellas or vocal loops available...I would love to try and put your voice on a dance track or even one of my funk tunes as I think you would add so much.
Maybe add a musical interlude or bridge into the song...but other than that no criticisms.
Added to my favorites very easily. You always manage such clarity with your productions. When the track started I found myself walking through an African market place or village lol.
A great track that really resonated with me.
Hey Elaine..Wow I'd nearly given up on you resurfacing on the Loop, you made my day! not for my birthday though I don't bother with those anymore seeing I'm getting way too old! haha but thank you for the sentiment anyway, I know you just had one so right back atcha, one of these days I might convince you of doing some spoken word for me, I have a poem better than Two Worlds which I've been sitting on for some time......one can but hope.... all the best Dave :)
The thing that is wonderful about this site and why its still my favorite after all these years is that you never know what you will get when you press play on someone's track...but I certainly struck gold today!
I really enjoyed your song. It drew me in right from the start. I love the way it flowed. Excellent lyrics. An all round good job.
Lots of different elements to this track that really appeal to the listener's ear. I could imagine this track playing in a very cool video game...its got a great vibe about it.
Thank you for adding my vocals to the track. I really like this and like I said before you have a natural talent. It will be interesting to see how others re-interpret your vision. I might even have a go at the remix comp myself lol.
I like it...very imaginative and I can understand why you gave it the title you did. I disagree about the comment that you didn't need the vocal fx....the track has been well thought out and it all works well. You asked in the forum for someone to do spoken word and I have done a few....whereabouts in the track would you use the spoken word?
Anyway....I'll message you and give you my email and you can send the passage you have in mind. I'll record it and don't worry if you don't use it.
I really enjoyed listening to this track but you left me with mixed emotions at the end. I'm not sure I liked the vocals...they kind of intruded into what was a very chilled and laid back vibe...but then maybe that was your intention...to bring us back down to Earth!
I've well and truly fallen off the reviewing wagon, but when I saw your post I knew I had to come and listen to your latest track.
I wasn't disappointed at all. No criticisms from me.
Wow lots of nostalgia for me listening to this track. I love the Pink Floyd influences, they really add a haunting feel to the whole piece which reflect the words.
Thanks for using my vocals John. I really enjoyed listening.
The vocals sounded a bit quiet in my headphones, but that is my only criticism and even that is more of an observation. The opening bars sent chills down my spine. I really like what you've done with the acapella and your arrangement is almost flawless...maybe the ending needed a touch more work. (ok two criticisms) ;)
Still a definite fave for me.
thanks for the feedback
you are the second person to tell me about the vox volume in headphones.. i'll have a through listen and try to fix this issue. meanwhile - try it on speakers :)
I can understand why you can't get over Matthew's sad passing. I know if it was someone close to me that I would not be able to forget. I think it's wonderful all the beautiful tribute tracks that have been made in his memory. I feel certain his spirit is with you and is proud of what you have achieved.
Hi Eshar!
It's been a while!
Thank you for your words-they mean a lot to me.I guess I must move on some day,but it's not today-I can't stop thinking and writing,and breathing and sleeping about Matthew.It's a pain that won't go away and I guess I'll still write many more songs for him.I keep trying to write something else-but nothing else comes yet-Thank you for understanding and enduring -You are a special soul!
Love always.
g.xxxxxx
I'm definitely picking up on the industrial and big beat vibes; not so much the dubstep, but I really like the energy that is emitted from this track. Nice work Paul.
You are such a professional Rei and when I say that I don't mean that you are just clinically good...because there is real emotion too.
Ha I am not explaining myself very well unfortunately. So I will just say that this sounds wonderful and I am honoured that you used my vocals. Thank You!
your voice and your lyrics are pure inspiration for me!! that being said it's easy for me to work with your work, so to say ...
thank you, thank you, thank you!!
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And, some of the best songs come together really quickly...so if it only took 35 minutes then that's great lol
eshar
Thank you very much for your feedback mate.
I am glad you liked it.
Thanks again for letting me know your take on it.
Jamid
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I certainly enjoyed listening to this. I love your vocals and was a bit disappointed to go to your profile and not find any acappellas or vocal loops available...I would love to try and put your voice on a dance track or even one of my funk tunes as I think you would add so much.
Maybe add a musical interlude or bridge into the song...but other than that no criticisms.
Elaine/eshar
Sending you good vibes,
Iti Yati
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Elaine
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The Chill Out meets Dance vibe worked perfectly.
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A great track that really resonated with me.
Belated Birthday Greetings!
Elaine
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I really enjoyed your song. It drew me in right from the start. I love the way it flowed. Excellent lyrics. An all round good job.
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~GO
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Elaine
-Sheen
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Anyway....I'll message you and give you my email and you can send the passage you have in mind. I'll record it and don't worry if you don't use it.
-Sheen
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Keep doing what you do!
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I wasn't disappointed at all. No criticisms from me.
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Elaine
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Thanks for using my vocals John. I really enjoyed listening.
Elaine
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Still a definite fave for me.
you are the second person to tell me about the vox volume in headphones.. i'll have a through listen and try to fix this issue. meanwhile - try it on speakers :)
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A powerful and moving song.
It's been a while!
Thank you for your words-they mean a lot to me.I guess I must move on some day,but it's not today-I can't stop thinking and writing,and breathing and sleeping about Matthew.It's a pain that won't go away and I guess I'll still write many more songs for him.I keep trying to write something else-but nothing else comes yet-Thank you for understanding and enduring -You are a special soul!
Love always.
g.xxxxxx
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Ha I am not explaining myself very well unfortunately. So I will just say that this sounds wonderful and I am honoured that you used my vocals. Thank You!
Elaine
thank you, thank you, thank you!!
peace and music, rei