cumulo99

thanks so much, brother! i built this track from one loop on this site and just ran with it. its one of my favorites for sure.

thanks so much for listening!

cumulo99 17th Aug 2015 09:50 - 9 years ago

on SJW colab ruffkins by wordybum

The raps, flows and lyrics are top notch!!! Fire!!! but the voice on the second verse could go harder. The mix in general needs a lot of work. The backing track is also very weak ( in my opinion) Such good rap skills deserve better beats, thats all there is to that. If you want to keep the dreamy feel to the track, keep the piano and synthy sounds, but rework that beat. Theres a hazy sound on the rhythm in the first part of the track, thats super annoying. Listening to it a second time, I realize that the last part of the song is where you should be heading. Just look at how the waveform expands. All of this is just an opinion, so please dont take it too personally. Listening to this a 3rd time, makes me think a chorus/hook could work really well too....
ok.. thats my 2 cents

wordybum replied 17th Aug 2015 - 9 years ago

thanks a lot, brother. i actually added to this track with the last verse. the 1st verse and the music were on this site, posted by SJW. i added that last verse over the weekend.

thanks so much for the feedback!

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