I like the feel of the intro, but it seems slightly off beat - when it tightens ups, it's great. IMHO synths and piano good but not so sure about the kicks. They have a good sound but I feel the rhythms need work, Overall, really good work, I only wished it lasted longer
yeah i had some trouble with the intro but i spent some time on it earlier and i think iv sorted it out altho iv added a few more things into it and i think its much better! i plan on making it into a whole lot more than what i have here its just i have way to many ideas for this and normally i complain i have no ideas at all haha
IMHO, After a bit of a slow start, when this gets going it's wonderful. Also,I feel the pad you use is too ordinary. This music deserves something better to set against the piano.
This is a classic. I feel this is better than the earlier fxed version as it lets the music speak for itself.
Hi Sukuta,
talking from gorilla to gorilla... lol... you are perfectly right... maybe I'll re-remix it.
The slow start was made to slowly enter in the mood... maybe it's too much slow.
The pad was choosen to give it an old print to it... maybe too much old... lol.
I sometimes have old tastes.
Thanks for this usefull comment.
hey thanks so much sukuta! i'll check you out in a bit...hey i see you use crystal, me too, idk if you know, but there are 3 free preset packs for crystal here:
Wonderful intro; I played it over and over. The oud could have been more to the foreground perhaps. Great moody singing in a lovely contralto. It is I in awe...
Lovely track,reminiscent of JM Jarre at his best. Like the bass pulses behind the spacey treble but would have liked the bottom end to have more punch.
I like the intro and the backing, some good ideas there. The vocals are a little raw but they feel immediate and honest. the drums fit well but I feel they need some variation as they started to become intrusive. Overall, I really like this.
Great beginning. Good combo of heavy drums and ambient. Love the synths. IMHO I felt the heavy drums began to outstay their welcome after a couple of minutes which was a pity as they partly masked so much good stuff happening.
Thank you very much :) I'm working on a series of similar sounding tunes...
You might check out my site, I have a collection called "Event Horizon" that is free.. it's all ominous and very dark.. but more electronic and less organic... I'd love to know what you think of that.
I like the drums and percussion and the arabic tang of the backing. Sweet guitar riffs. Some nice backing sounds introduced but I feel they come and go and I'd like them to stay a little longer so I could get to know them before they leave...
Another original and fascinating mix. I admire your seeking for new musical expression. IMHO, I feel the drum and bass backing need some variety, either a break or some new patterns to maintain interest in the background. Then the backing can return later in the track, refreshed. The production is great, as always.
I'm afraid that you are in right Kwembe...
Thank you a lot for this tips...Maybe whan I come back from the holidy I 'll true to make some changes...
RGDS
SERGEJ
I like the beat, sets up a great dark tone. The strings work very well to reinforce the mood. IMHO this would be great as an intro to a longer dark ambient piece I would love to listen to. You handle dark well.
Nice beats and synths. I like the way you vary the dynamics and the rhythms to keep it fresh. A lot of classic trance effects in here and I'm reminded why I love it.
Thanks i agree the lead was a lil long need to do a few edits
not a bad idea a new theme would give it a whole unique aspect after the zippy lead for a chorus with maybe a bass drop? this may stop it from getting repeative
Completely original. Respect for your creativity and skill,I know how hard it is to get sampled voices sounding right. It's only when I read your notes again I realised there are only vocals and drums, the track sounds so full of interest and colour.
Thaank you my friend...I realy like this stuff and my serious wish is to here it in life...Who knows...maybe some day...
Thank you and thank you again for listening...
With respect
SERGEJ
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This is a classic. I feel this is better than the earlier fxed version as it lets the music speak for itself.
talking from gorilla to gorilla... lol... you are perfectly right... maybe I'll re-remix it.
The slow start was made to slowly enter in the mood... maybe it's too much slow.
The pad was choosen to give it an old print to it... maybe too much old... lol.
I sometimes have old tastes.
Thanks for this usefull comment.
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I listened to many of your tracks and I like your style and sounds.
Ciao.
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some quite excellent, at least as a jumping off point, cheers...dbl
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Thank you a lot for this tips...Maybe whan I come back from the holidy I 'll true to make some changes...
RGDS
SERGEJ
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The lead was fun at the start but IMHO it went on too long, another theme might be better later on on the track.
The surprise bleep at the end was a good idea but I felt you paused too long before it arrived and the effect was lost.
I really enjoyed this. Great fun .
not a bad idea a new theme would give it a whole unique aspect after the zippy lead for a chorus with maybe a bass drop? this may stop it from getting repeative
as for that bleep that was an accident opps! lol
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Thank you and thank you again for listening...
With respect
SERGEJ