Sets up a great chilled vibe. Lovely synth washes and some beautiful sounds. I Like the slightly quirky percussion. Those little pauses int the rhythm are a good touch. The ending left me a little bit up in the air...
This track has a lot of promise. I like the opening theme whiuch moves on well to the second section. However, I feel the inbtro goes on a little too long. I love the goa atyle electro sounds and the moody feel of the first half. There are flashes of brilliance in the second half but there feels a little too much padding there as well, IMO
I like this a lot. A deep chill effect without the boredom I get from a lot of so-called chill-out music. The drums are inventive and interesting but I feel they don't quite seem to fit.
I like the emotional tone set by the synths and the bass voice fits in well. the track has a dark beauty that rally appeals to me. I'd just like some more of the deep voice, I think he's great and sets off the music well.
A lovely start, I love the thunder and the way the drums and synths set the mood. Some lovely touches and the thunder subtly inserted trough the track is a neat idea.
However, I feel it needs some sense of progression, the start sounds the same as the middle sounds the same as the end. It has some wonderful touches and introducing one or two new themes would propel it from good to great.
Simplicity and monotony are themes of the song... But I'm afraid you're right. I've kind of overdone it with doing less... Just like... Underdone... ;-)
In my next projects I'm a little mor keen in changing themes or bring in a bit more Progression :-)
Lovely track with effective and appropriate drums and backing.The heartfelt piano and flute start with a lovely theme but I feel it needs a second theme before the first theme palls. With that, I think it could be the best thing I've heard here yet.
Great start and lovely vocals. The drums became a bit intrusive and started to feel a bit samey in the second half and masked the intricacy of the layering of some great ideas.
Thanks man. Yeah I know...its just a ruff draft really, and I gotta figure out how to get to the quality I know it can be. I know the drums are too loud and probably to many layers of drumkits..it kinda kills the rest of it.
thanks for the criticism. Its what I appreciate most!
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Overall, I enjoyed this a lot.
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Great elegant music.
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However, I feel it needs some sense of progression, the start sounds the same as the middle sounds the same as the end. It has some wonderful touches and introducing one or two new themes would propel it from good to great.
Simplicity and monotony are themes of the song... But I'm afraid you're right. I've kind of overdone it with doing less... Just like... Underdone... ;-)
In my next projects I'm a little mor keen in changing themes or bring in a bit more Progression :-)
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Good work.
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Great ideas but I feel the theremin needs work. It sounded more like a cat than a ghost to me. Maybe the phrasing is wrong.
Thank you.
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thanks for the criticism. Its what I appreciate most!
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