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Ooh, wasn't expecting that vocal, instantly got Tool vibes, nice, real nice.
This is happy Tool, I like it.
Oh the guitar comes in.
If you'd like a less midi-sounding guitar sound let me know, I'd record it for you.

That was a very well put together track. Great freakin' job!

Arrangement wise, I felt very confused when the first bar hit, consider taking away some instrumental elements, similar to how you did with the second bar.
The rest is decent, but the start of the song is jarring.

Loved that last riff, tasty

Mid range frequencies are your friend.

Guitars down, drums up. Bass is overpowering everything.

Fuck you Dave... We all have a Dave creeping somewhere.

Yeah, you aren't too bad my dude.

More... bass... doe... bro.. Lead bass I mean.. We like bass.

Automate more things in your bass sound's synth!

Good start, I'd say refine it more.

Still... Fuck you Dave.

Ooo, this is weird, dark... Diggin' it.

This is really great my dude.

I could imagine finding this on a movie soundtrack.

It's strange that this hasn't more interactions.

Fav'd for sure... This really is something else, I'll be looking out for more \m/

Big.. Smooth guitars... Sick... The mix sounds sweet on my side.

This is great.

Well done guys \m/

The solo is luscious.

The singer gives this a similar vibe as Cigarettes After Sex (They're great).

I can't think of any ways to improve this so I'll leave you with big well done!

I'd be interested to hear this again if you do any tweaking, so let me know if you do :)

Weird... Original... New genre right here?

I don't know what to think of this.

I like it.

"Nothing, nothing, nothing" I would add some fx as is fades.

"I've lost nothing" I'd add a big single kick/boom just after that, i'd fit somewhere around 2:00, in my head it sounds reverberated.

I think a few "cinematic" addition would make this much more.

Sounding good mate, although you should be making your own basses. This sounds like MONXX not you. Or at least f***ing the loops up beyond recognition.

I hate naming my tracks, I usually look at my hardware or something from within my DAW. Slimebolt = My guitar, DRB-60 = A DI box and my new tune... Black tape XD XD.

My first thought is to take the lead with the violin, I googled some violin brands.. Mendini sounds cool.

Top production as always.

Have we met?

Why not..

Great flow and atmosphere, I'm looking forward to hearing on some speakers.

We've got a similar style, I encourage you to verify that.

Good dubstep is hard to find these days.

This would find a good place in a movie or video game.

Hot damn!

Why I've not clicked one of your tracks before I don't know.

This is great.

I'm getting a Tool vibe. This is crying out for vocals.

I'll certainly be clicking the next.

Caught this on SC, had to show some love

Expand my brother, oddly timed silence would work very well.

It's got potential but even if I was stoned I would call it boring.

Like I said though it's got potential, give it more variation and oddities and it could be a cool track.

I would not call this Dnb, it's techno dude.

I'd comment more but I hate techno.

Out here bamboozling people :D

Sounds like drum and bass from an innocent, if that makes sense, no feeling of hatred or discontent, something rare in the genre. That's not a negative impression mind, it has a chirpy/happiness to it.

Soft. Unusual.

Not sure what I think of it.

I'm so surprised you haven't been snapped up by some label.

Great work dude.

Not a fan of Dubstep anymore, it became very generic but I can pass on some things I've learned. Your bass (synth) is weak, here's how you fix that. I don't know what software you use so I can't say for sure on how but you want to separate the audio into three, one with only the low freqs, one for the mids, one for the highs, then apply different effects, experiment here, but with the lows I would treat it like you would sub bass.

On sub bass, if you want to make dubstep sub bass is the key, firstly use it and secondly learn how to get the biggest sound. Sidechaining is your friend when the kick drum fights the same freqs.

Do some youtubing on classic Dubstep, UK stuff, an example would be Loefah - Disko Rekah. That shit be slippery af... Thanks to the sub freqs.

Play with the velocities (and maybe pitch too) of the first snares, I think it'll bring some extra life to that first section.

If I was in a lighter mood I would enjoy this more, I'll come back when I am.

My mind is imagining a sidechained sub (quiet to loud kinda effect) kind of similar to what you have but a littler more slippery if that makes sense.

I'm enjoying the progression of the melodies, rare in electronic music.

I'll be keeping my eye out for more of your tracks.

Keep it up dude

Recorded jams aren't always the best "songs" but interesting to listen to as a musician.

A great display of your musicianship :)

Very interesting track dude.
Be sure to take the advice already here.

I would use a different bass growl, doesn't really fit to me. Something smoother would work better I think.

Try hiding some of the elements in the back of the mix, like the guitar and vocals at different points, bringing them forward when you can here and there.
It's got some great potential.

Sexeh..