hey man that song was was great. love the progression. it sounded well put together. that being said the vocals need some work. I know it takes a metal ear to even begin to hear and understand the vocals in a scream band. I have no idea what hardware you have but try turning the re verb up just a little. if you have a mixer try to ring out the room your recording in to get rid of un wanted frequencies like the ones that cause you speakers to sequel or your voice all muffled. if the low mid and high sound good them leave them at unity. I personaliy like having the mid down past unity just a little bit and high and low equally above the unity mark just a bit. lol dont dick alcohol before or milk hahaha now im starting to sound like your mother. keep it up man music the most beutiful gift we have. good luck
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