this sound crazy, reind me of scooter, just need some mc that sound like his on pills spitinghis brains out. i like hte 2nd drop the best. all hte dorps are good and different so its impossilbe to stay bored, usually dont even listen to this type of stuff, good job
dont know why it says electronica this sound like some kanye type stuff, and i mean that as a compliment, i bet your album will sound dope, keep going cant wait to hear more!!
This track is wild as hell, has a rea live futuristic band feal to it, i love all the instruments and the progerssion, the wah wah guitar is amazing, everything is amazing, makes me want to ride my car and just zone out and be free. good job!
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yo this is really good track, your voice is catchy, did you produce and rap on this also? the rappers voice should be turned up a little with a bit more eq i think
the beat is really good, the first rapper has a very weird original flow. the second rapper is good, this is is a well put together track that doesnt get repetitive hiphop wise.
hey joseph.
thanx for stopping by
im glad u liked the track
and yeah on the bass part.
i thought that the melodies had some amount of bass packed so i didnt want to risk the mixing of sounds to such a clustered leverl.
but next time ill surely work on that part too.
thanx for ur views.
this track is really good, you have a natural presents on the mic. the only thing i would critic is the timing of flow somtimes it feels like it falls of in certain points
I really appreciate you taking the time to listen and review the track. I agree with your sentiments regarding the flow. I am working on that area and trying to find my center.
Good job, usualy its hard to make a beat sound natural around an already recorded accapella. i liked the baseline and the style of hiphop feel was original
there is alot potential with this track, you have alot of different elements to play with, the tansition are nice also. I think if you re arrange this correctly and reprogram some of the structure you could have a hit song
A big thanks for stopping by and listening. Once again some really positive and constructive comments, which will help me improve this track. thanks again for your time.
Take care,
Mark/Larry!
this is fcuking incredible, please repost this when it is done. this has some hiphop influence in it. I cant get over how big this instrumental sound. Great production by the way, you could have a rapper and singer on the hook if you wanted.
flow could be a little bit more tighter recording wise but this is the best zhit iv herd on this site.. beat is ill as hell, your bro got some nice presence on the mic. fix the acoustics of your room to it sound airy through my computer speakers
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thank you for stopping by .
everybody can use this but if you mean that you want
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i appreciate your time and offer.
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thanx for stopping by
im glad u liked the track
and yeah on the bass part.
i thought that the melodies had some amount of bass packed so i didnt want to risk the mixing of sounds to such a clustered leverl.
but next time ill surely work on that part too.
thanx for ur views.
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