mrwolf14
London is drowning and I live by the river
Munich, Germany
Joined : 7th Oct 2012 - 12 years ago
Last Online : 26th Feb 2024 - 11 months ago
mrwolf14 comments on tracks
mrwolf14 has posted 567 comments on other peoples tracks.
on Sunshine snippet rough draft by priest39
Very good work with the keys: the sound you choose is "classic" but interesting at the same time.
Good work,
Looking forward for the next one
on Henry Pascal feat BabyGee - Answers by HenryPascal
It reminds me a bit of the early 80s pop songs, a very sweet melodies with a delicate arrangement. Well done.
Ciao, Domenico
PS: I refrained from commenting in Italian... but in case you should need a bass track for one of your songs, don't hesitate to PM me in our mother language!
on Glimpse Of Gentler Times by Orlando51
Thanks.
With much appreciation_____Orlando
on Switchblade ft Jimmy Stiles by theHumps
Outstanding guitar work. Kudos to Jimmy :-)
But you did your part very well: good production, solid bass line with a very consistent sound.
Keep up rocking!
Domenico
Yeah, Jim rocks, ha!
Thanks!
Wayne
on Kai-Leen - PA KOUPAB by Nous2
But I find it very pleasant. Your stream of words flows very nicely and the music and the vocal track work very well together.
Interesting!
Thanks for sharing!
Kind regards, Domenico
A bientôt !
on Low Rider Tribute to the band War by MWRatridge
Well done.
If I have to find a "critique point" ... the rhythm is a bit too "loopy": it would be interesting to hear more of a live feeling on drums and bass.
But I am nitpicking here... great production!
And probably I already told you this some time back, you have a very good voice.
Relaxed but interesting.
Liked.
Ciao, Domenico
tyvm. I've always loved this song.
Mark.
on Tell Me TWO - CAP - FULL SONG by tsochai
Still, I really enjoyed the song.
Maybe if you want make it more "commercial" (whatever this means) the advice from CentralsDev and Danke is a good one: you need a solid chorus. Which you should also highlight with a change (uplift) in the beat IMHO.
Also, your beat would benefit from a bit more "motion" in the bass-line.
Good flow.
Overall, as I said, I really enjoyed the song.
Keep the good work.
Ciao, Domenico
Glad you enjoyed the song - definitely taking all the suggestions here into consideration.
But as this song is relatively older, I have a lot of tracks out since this one that I would love to get your advice on as well, thanks alot for your time.
much love
-CAP
on Qlasick by KnightHeir
Someone else already pointed out how the "beat" and the "rap" are sometimes "fighting each other". This is true to some extent. It may be a stylistic decision, and that's fine. Still there should me more points where the music and the vocals "meet each other".
So... IMHO you are just missing 1 point to go to 10/10.
Keep doing what you like to do: we like to hear it.
Ciao, Domenico
on Sax in the morning by ronabo
I liked the "offbeat" drums. They add some interest to an already very interesting song.
The piano work is outstanding.
The sax soli flow very well: I am in principle always again "midi-sax" sounds. In this case they are very realistic. Still I may prefer the same solo played with a synth sound (but this is my personal problem: why try to "mimic" a real instrument when you are playing a synthesizer ... which is already a "real instrument"...)
Good song.
And I am glad I discovered your talent.
Thanks.
Take care, Domenico
Robert
on Bafunkadunk by neuromancer56
I should be disappointed by the lack of a "real bass" line, but this is working so good as it is that I cannot!
It makes me think a lot to the soundtrack of the "b-movies" of the 70s (think "blacula")
Great work.
Ciao, Domenico
on Paradis Artificiel by BLEEP
It sounds very "live". Well done!
Ciao, Domenico
may be the mixage result which gave this "live" render lol
i went on your page, no new track? soon may be? i hope :)
bleep
on Cry of the Wolfman by Neomorpheus
Very bluesy: I like a lot the guitar and bass parts. Very inspired.
...and I totally agree on what you said on the Wolfman: he is a sad and lonely man who does not even deserve the right to shed tears, because he is a fierce creature and nobody will ever imagine how deep his feelings are.
So he goes on singing the blues and playing his bass! ;-)
Take care.
Yours sincerely, MrWolf
on The saw is family by FatalDecline
Not my cup of tea, but I can appreciate the skills involved in this production. It works well in my opinion.
I had to read the lyrics cause I couldn't figure out a single word from the brutal-vocals (my limit... I am not a native speaker).
So, well done... now go and get rid of the corpse before the manhunter comes ;-)
Ciao, Domenico
on THE PUNK ROCK PROJECT - Beggar by BradoSanz
This is an incredibly well made Pop-Punk song.
If we need to look for things which can be improved (but bear in mind, we are nitpicking on an outstanding production here):
- drums (already mentioned, I won't spend much words here) ... even if they're midi, they sound too "polished" for the genre. A minor thing: you did a very good job in programming fills and different rhythms. It works VERY WELL.
- vocal track. In some points we can hear some artifacts (auto tune? phase issues? not sure)... e.g at 0:56
Again: WONDERFUL SONG!
My personal highlight: the guitar, sound and riff are 100% "pro" (if this means anything). Superb. Could not get any better than this.
Thanks for sharing!
Ciao, Domenico
As I mentioned in previous replies, I had to make the track in under 24 hours so there are, indeed, a lot of flaws with this one lol. I sincerely appreciate the critique, however, because that means you really listened to the song! Peace.
on For You - Ft lily und wolf - Final by zipbass
You did a wonderful track out of a very good vocal part.
Ciao, Domenico
PS: I listened to the original version and I have to say that I like a lot the rendition you did. Again... good work!
on You Know Im No Good Ft LynziStringer by bobjones2260
I agree with the previous comments... this track sounds good and it's hard to believe that the vocal track was done "before".
Everything works fine.
Busy drum line (typical 70s drumming I would say), good guitar sound and solid playing.
Enjoyed.
Ciao, Domenico
on Charms Of Leisure by Orlando51
Definitely you can stay relaxed since there's no need for you to change style. You are very good at what you do!
Beautiful song.
I like how the rhythm section is "in the background" and let the piano and guitar shine. The string part is creating a nice "change" in the song.
Special appreciation to the subtle work the strings are doing when accompanying the piano (e.g. ~1:50): I like when there are so many little details in a "simple" song like this.
You are a real master.
Take care, Domenico
Really glad to read such a generous review and some very encouraging words. Also nice to know there are still people
who appreciate a kind of music that is pretty much out of predominant trends of today. Thank you so much my friend !
With much appreciation_____Orlando
on unknowen by DjLunich
I think it can work fine on a dance floor, less for listening.
The rhythm is good and all the instruments make a nice layer, but maybe it lacks an element of interest to catch the ear of the listener.
Again, I imagine this could work well for a dance crowd.
And probably that was the target.
So, well done!
Ciao, Domenico
on If You Don't Love Me by iez13
The vocal part is interesting enough to keep everything glued together.
Nice textures: I like the synth sounds you use and the piano is a nice touch.
Overall a great piece of music.
Well done!
Ciao, Domenico
on Dj Arloph-Jete Dlo by NaejMusic
I understand from your previous comment that the vocal tracks were not "as good as they should be" but I believe you did overall a good job.
The track content is more in the bass region but it works.
Only question to you: are you intending to change the ending?
It sounds a bit "abrupt" at the moment. I think it deserves more.
Take care, Domenico
on Wake Me When Im Nude by BlancFroid
Ciao, Domenico
on Le Vampire Romantique by Orlando51
Production, composition, arrangement, choice of sounds, everything at the highest possible levels. Simply perfect.
The "fil rouge" is the bass-pattern which flows under the other instruments for the whole song, constant and "beating" like the time that flows (vampires story here, we speak about centuries not years).
Piano work is probably what stands out but the whole arrangement is of the finest.
You are a real talent!
Ciao, Domenico
With much appreciation_____Orlando
on In The Dreams Of The Damned by ValveDriver
I would not put it into any "category" ... but if forced to, I would say that it should have "progressive" and "dark" into the name.
Ciao, Domenico
Take care.
V.
on Translucid by StaticNomad
I was looking for something interesting to hear, then I thought, let's have a look at MrNomad's archive... there must be something there.
And I found this nice little gem: lot of words already spent on this, so I'll keep it short.
I like your work on the cello: you are a talented guy and you make a creative use of all the instruments you play. You deserve some real respect.
The song is nice: good, but not the best one. I wouldn't dare to say that it is "boring" (no way) but it somehow lacks some "peaks".
I would even consider shortening the "middle part" and make your guitar enter the scene a bit earlier.
But of course, nothing will be changed: this song can stay in its current form, it will still be enjoyed and you will use your time for the next one.
As usual: outstanding work.
Ciao, Domenico
PS: being Italian my mother language, I did not find the title word so "strange"... maybe I am missing something.
Yes, it's worth going through the Nomad archive if you're looking for something interesting to hear, especially as you haven't been on the site much in the last year.
"You deserve some real respect."
I get a bit but I can always do with more - especially in real life (rather than just online). We're all the same!
"The song is nice: good, but not the best one."
I agree. Pleasant and interesting but not amazing. A bit more minimal, for a change. The peaks are probably 1:14-2:25. That lead cello part is quite exciting, I find.
"make your guitar enter the scene a bit earlier."
No guitar here. You probably think it's guitar at 3:26 because I'm playing the cello with a guitar pick - something I very rarely do as it's a bit awkward to do. But it does give a different sound. Much more like guitar.
"I would even consider shortening the "middle part""
I like that section. It's quite mystical and trippy.
The title is a word I made up. A cross between 'translucent' and 'lucid'.
Here are two tracks you will prefer from the Nomad archive. First is a long, mystical blues track with lots of guitar. And bass. Deep chill and groovy blues:
The Mythical Gates
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/177482
And here's a psychedelic cello grunge track that will surprise you as there's no guitar. Anything that sounds like guitar is cello:
Skyscaper
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/183448
Thanks again for the thoughts. They're always useful.
on The Fellas by notahs
Your little something is very nice :-)
I like the drum-loop you used: well produced, with a good depth in the kit.
Wise use of the vocals, the male/female create the right contrast and you highlighted the different characters with your eq/production.
Very good.
Hope to hear soon the "complete" version.
Take care, Domenico