You did a great job with the composition, but it sounds like you mastered it needs to be mastered a bit more. The higher frequencies seem a little too powerful. Other than that, we enjoyed it.
The sound you are going for is definitely there, so the mood is achieved with the track. However, if you want a more Drum & Bass feel, a minor suggestion would be to layer your snare and compress it so you can get a more high quality less distorted hit with it (unless you are going for that sound), and to add a wider variety of hi hats to your drum patterns.
I would add some breaks rammed through a low-end filter and a reverb during the build up. - Mike
Try adding some orchestral-esque percussion in the beginning if you want to drum home a more dark aggressive feel during our more atmospheric segments. - Paul
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Try adding some orchestral-esque percussion in the beginning if you want to drum home a more dark aggressive feel during our more atmospheric segments. - Paul