CheshireCat

Bass tends to be underapreciated in music, especially as a lead instrument. This shows what it can do.

I could never get high to this it would freak the shit out of me. Sounds like something from a cult movie. Very interesting.

The machine gun beat and helicopter riffs in the beginning make this track really heavy without resorting to cheap death metal techniques. Good job.

There's some great advice here, and I also think the lyrics and voice are pretty good but I would turn up the bass and mid ranges. I wanna here more kick from the drums and a heavier, more sustained sound from the guitar. You have a straight-up metal riff just waiting to break out. Also, consider investing in a better mic.

infectiously busy, it made me bob my head. I like the ambiguous jumping between major and minor.