Evisma

Evisma

Better Than You Since 82
Middle America, United States
Joined : 1st Apr 2013 - 13 years ago
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Evisma
Evisma 12th Oct 2024 05:43 - 1 year ago

on Moss Mother II- Reality Is The Tolling Of The Bell by ValveDriver
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Evisma 23rd Aug 2024 14:51 - 2 years ago

on LIFETIME by glennwhite6504
This was a very pleasant listen. Beautiful phrasing at times and a constantly wandering melody.
I did not hear a recurring theme or repeated section. I believe a tiny bit of compression would be beneficial and a few initial notes seem to have their transient cut off and begin with a kind of swell. Sounds like an editing issue and not including the first pluck of a phrase. Sounds really good and I enjoyed it!
glennwhite6504
glennwhite6504 replied 23rd Aug 2024 - 2 years ago
Hi Evisma....appreciate the listen and comment. I think your comments are spot on my friend......I will say I agree so much with this because of the fact I recorded this entire track once. I improvised from start to finish playing along side a loop. My intention was not to even upload it but decided it was decent enough to do so. My other track uploaded was done the same way. Of course future uploads will be mastered a bit better but these 2 I let it fly. I again appreciate your thoughts....very valuable and I thank you.
Evisma
Evisma 1st Nov 2019 17:42 - 6 years ago

on Ancient Rage by StaticNomad
Greetings, great and powerful Nomad.

It's nice to hear this on the loop! Really enjoyed the few additions you've made since I last heard it. I believe I contributed the least out of the three of us. Listening again, I hear that your early lead guitar parts are in phrygian mode and now I can noodle with your riff a bit and know what I'm doing. Didn't know how to get that eastern feel till learning the modes.

As for the mix, I listened through a stereo system and it seems a bit compressed and there is some slight unintended ducking, fluctuating volume in spots. Nothing major, and I definitely enjoyed it. Especially the bass playing. Tasty shiznit there. I'll try to find Parallax, but I may have lost it when my recording setup died last year. New stuff from me soon, with vocals.

Evan, innumerating all that he's to do.
StaticNomad
StaticNomad replied 3rd Nov 2019 - 6 years ago
Salutations, small and pitiful gonad.

Yes, nice to hear it on the Loop. It's only taken three years for me to upload it.

"I believe I contributed the least out of the three of us."

I believe you did but those bass parts are very useful, especially the tone, which I'm not able to get.

But you know that it's the bass player's job to shut up and sit in the background, merely providing some low end and rhythm, never anything fancy. In most bands, the bass player will be immediately unplugged if he's seen or heard fingering a chord. And then made to leave the band immediately. Even if it's mid-song during a massive stadium gig.

I know very little about modes so don't know the phrygian though I have heard of it. Early lead guitar parts? There aren't any until the middle breakdown. Unless you mean The Valve's chugging early distortion.

Unintended ducking is certainly unintended. Shame about that and the apparently sub standard mix.

"Tasty shiznit there."

Yes. Whoever you got to do those bass parts can definitely play!

Yes, please find Parallax. Would be good to complete it.

As you've already worked out, there's a whole new album of Maynard lyrics to use for signoffs. So I give you:

Great And Powerful Nomad,

Calculating steps away from you
Evisma
Evisma 14th Jan 2018 06:02 - 8 years ago

on Stairway to Heaven by CalifKen
Gotta say, this sounds more like you were covering "Riding The Storm Out" from REO Speedwagon. Some pretty decent lines going on here, but I don't hear Stairway at all,... which is fine. Tired of that song. Stairway and Eagles' Hotel California can both be buried in a deep place for a good 25 years and be revisited then and probably still feel like they're overplayed.
Again, nice playing and done well, especially if you're playing the keys by hand.
Evisma
Evisma 10th Jan 2018 22:40 - 8 years ago

on Un-Become by Xenicbeatz
Greetings.

Intro vocals definitely have an Ozzy feel. Kudos on having the balls to put it out there. I like the writing here and everything seems to work in the structure. The only issue is the low end is way too loud and crushes everything else. When your waveform is a solid block like it is here, you are too compressed and it sounds pretty bad. Again, your writing is really good and I don't want to dissuade you from continuing, just need to make a small adjustment. I hope this helps a bit.

Evan
Evisma
Evisma 25th Dec 2017 22:11 - 8 years ago

on The Sky by TheParadigms
Greetings.

Dave said it well. Pretty impressed with the vocal effects and they're effectiveness. Drums tone and writing fit the music really well, which can be hard to do. Swelling, atmospheric throbbing under ballsy vocals.
Good stuff, I dig it.

Take care.

Evan
Evisma
Evisma 7th Nov 2017 16:24 - 8 years ago

on Volyewmetal by VolyewmVelocity
Choir intro is nice but could use some polish.

Verse has good energy, if repetitive. The punctuated note following the 16th note chuggs I would have held. But that's just me.

I dig the whole feel here. Good stuff.

Evan
Evisma
Evisma 4th Nov 2017 22:35 - 8 years ago

on Dreams vs Nightmares - Instrumental by DeaDResT
Creepy cinematic feel to the intro till the guitars hit. Guitars are well written and done well. Drums fit very well, and almost seemed to help in the writing.

Guitars are pretty clear throughout. Something I struggle with. Not overdone, not too empty, this track sits nicely in the Goldilocks Zone.

Great work!
Evan
DeaDResT
DeaDResT replied 6th Nov 2017 - 8 years ago
Thank you, yes... the creepy intro is part s nightmares theme of the song. This idea came from a stalker experience my fiancé had a few years back. I am almost done editing the vocals and hope it will live up to expectations :) ...p.s She is the vocalist, So expect some nice driving vocs ;)
Evisma
Evisma 31st Oct 2017 04:02 - 8 years ago

on The Strangest Thing by toastedavalanche
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Evisma 29th Oct 2017 23:11 - 8 years ago

on Man Of Many Limits by StaticNomad
A rather epic intro, with piano and what sounds like bowing. Nice smacling drums enter and add some attitude. Old guitar playing? I'm guessing because you've mentioned not playing for a bit.

You are becoming more fluent-sounding with the cello. Huge improvements in sound quality.

Lots of little extras here. Editing flourishes I never tried to get good at.

Pretty laid-back and again, good fishing music. Good hammock music.

Good stuff. No rockin, but that's alright. It all sounded good.

Evan, chasing trails of smoke and reason.
StaticNomad
StaticNomad replied 5th Nov 2017 - 8 years ago
Yo.

I wish the intro was a bit more epic. I tried adding more reverb to make things bigger and more powerful after 0:23, when bowed cello and second, heavily delayed piano enter. But it didn't work.

"smacling drums"

I love a bit of smacling. Very tasty as a dessert.

"drums enter and add some attitude."

Yes but surely they're not really your type of drums? More like hip hop.

"Huge improvements in sound quality."

Are you saying that my older cello recordings don't sound (as) good? I'm pretty sure I'm using exactly the same setup. I've been, to some extent, a bit unadventurous with my cello recorded sound in the last 18 months and generally just use the same multi effects patch for recording it.

"Lots of little extras here."

Find me a Nomad track without any!

"Editing flourishes I never tried to get good at."

But you still could though one big difference between my music and yours is that I'm all about micro sculpting of the track as that's partly my composition technique. You're more trying to write live band music. I sculpt and shape and obsessively edit and that's partly how new ideas are formed.

"Old guitar playing?"

Yes - everything except the electric guitar part starting 1:09. It really pleases me to reuse old, leftover parts. There's quite a skill to doing it.

"No rockin, but that's alright."

I disagree. How about 1:42-2:04? The track goes up and powerful there, with three cello layers and rockier drums.

"Good hammock music."

Yes, especially if you're lying back smoking weed.

"It all sounded good."

Thanks. I put a lot of careful, patient work into making this. So many interesting sounds to trim and arrange.

Unlimited Nomad, blue as our new second sun.
Evisma
Evisma 28th Oct 2017 17:29 - 8 years ago

on Translucid by StaticNomad
Yos, Heys and Sups, you Grandmf.

Nice long sustained, relaxing bowing in the beginning, seeming to begin a story. Drums come in and add some structure, good length on the bowed section before.

We go into a happier place for the first real section. Butterflies and meadows.

Next section is a bit darker and reflective. 2:50 driving snare hits are nice there.

3:28 pluckery is a nice addition. Jaunty little line. This would make for a good track for fishing on the boat. I'll start making YouTube fishing vids and you can supply the music. Mine doesn't go along with fishing well.

Percussion kinda picks up there at the end, but mostly stays the same on the way out. All rather calming and relaxing.

Been enjoying the online dating chronicles you've been keeping me informed of. Taco-Fanny is your next track title, I know it.

Evan, rolling windows down for the cool night air is curious.
StaticNomad
StaticNomad replied 5th Nov 2017 - 8 years ago
Yo, grandfatherfucker.

Sorry for the rather late reply. Then again, you've taken far longer.

Yes - nice, long, bowed intro. Very relaxing and satisfying to play.

"Butterflies and meadows."

Excellent, very accurate description! You're expressing in words what I was feeling. Some of the high cello parts do sound a bit like buzzing or some other creature flying about. Very bright, playful and warm stuff.

"Next section is a bit darker and reflective"

Yes, dark and mystical. Quite a change!

"2:50 driving snare hits are nice"

They are but they're quite electronic so I wouldn't expect you to like them.

"3:28 pluckery is a nice addition."

Two lines of plectrum-played cello. Not sure how many people ever do that but playing with fingers or bow would not have sounded the same. Very different, actually.

"I'll start making YouTube fishing vids and you can supply the music."

It's a plan but will it ever happen?

"All rather calming and relaxing."

Yeah, nothing badass but it's just not that sort of track. I really like it and find it quite addictive ie I want to hear what's coming next every time I listen to it.

Static Transmad (I'm your passenger)
Evisma
Evisma 11th Sep 2017 20:06 - 9 years ago

on Been a Long Time Coming by topvega
I dig the sticks in the intro.
Laid back groove with a nice rhythmic push and pull from the rhythm guitar.
What are you using for dirty leads through this?
I like the backing guitars growl and the drums seem to fit well. Good stuff.

Evan
topvega
topvega replied 16th Sep 2017 - 9 years ago
It's funny you say that about the sticks intro. I have been going through old tracks I have left on my computer and I constantly felt like I need to revisit JamStix again for my drums. They have a certain realistic feel you just can't get with AD or EZ Drummer.
I pretty much use the same thing for all my guitar and bass sounds. Guitar Rig 5 I believe it is. Lots of great sounds in there.

Thanks for the listen and the feedback. Always much appreciated.

tv
Evisma
Evisma 7th Sep 2017 05:07 - 9 years ago

on Bruises by toastedavalanche
Always good stuff from you. I dig the feel your music has and the thought you put into lyrics. Not many people making this kind of eclectic music. You have an edge there. It's a demo so I won't go into technical advice. I'll just say I dig it and dig what you do.

Take care.

Evan
Evisma
Evisma 19th May 2017 03:34 - 9 years ago

on Breathe by ColeSade911
I enjoyed this.
Acoustic sounds pretty good. Basic pattern and nothing too flashy. Vocals are decent and lyrics are pretty good. A bit depressing, but I've always liked a touch of that in music.
Pretty good stuff here. Good job.

Evan
Evisma
Evisma 11th May 2017 19:06 - 9 years ago

on Under the Waves by theHumps
Greetings.

Intro made me think if a cross between Sister Hazel and Drive By Truckers. Verse more Truckers.

Really enjoying the bass guitar throughout. I would have overdone it and ruined it. You made it tasteful and interesting, and with a great tone.

A kind-of happy/murky feel coexisting. Not murky in tone or sound quality, but in conveyed atmosphere. I dig it!

I hope all is well.

Evan
theHumps
theHumps replied 21st May 2017 - 9 years ago
DBT were on a Tiny Desk Concert podcast a little while ago. I do like their music, good story songs.

Been working on instrument sound quality lately, now that I can hear things better I need to make some more adjustments, things are slowly getting better, hopefully.

Thanks for listening in and commenting!

Wayne
Evisma
Evisma 29th Apr 2017 20:18 - 9 years ago

on Overmyth II - Cathedral Of The Witch by ValveDriver
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Evisma 3rd Apr 2017 02:38 - 9 years ago

on Overmyth I - Inception Of The Truth by ValveDriver
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Evisma 29th Mar 2017 03:24 - 9 years ago

on Overmyth I - Inception Of The Truth by ValveDriver
How be ye, V to the D?

Opening swells reminds me of "The Creature Lives" off Once More 'Round The Sun. Goes a bit different with some effective drums. Distortion kicking in makes me think of "No Quarter".

Goddamn impressive guitars here. Cannot lie. Great job making it sound like actual guitar lines. Listening to this, I know I would have EQ'd and mixed the life right out of this track. I've got it cranked in headphones and there is a bit of high end I would take out of the distortion, but I never know when to stop and wind up killing energy with several cuts.

Outro is epic and finalizing. Got no advice or thoughts on improvements. Good heaviness with awesome tones. Beefy.

I hope all is well and getting wellerer with you.

Evan
ValveDriver
ValveDriver replied 2nd Apr 2017 - 9 years ago
What's happnin' Mr. E.?
I'm doing ok. Things are a bit still at the moment, but tha's better than a decline. Right?

"Opening swells reminds me of "The Creature Lives"

Now that you mention it, it does. It would make sense. They are one of my top tier favorite bands. Not as much as Floyd, but they're up there.

" Distortion kicking in makes me think of "No Quarter".

Are you thinking the Crowbar cover, or the original Zep version? I honestly don't hear it. Either way, I've always liked that song. I know it's blasphemous in some circles, but I like Crowbar's version better.

" there is a bit of high end I would take out of the distortion"

Yeah. It might be a little too sizzly. I was trying to go for a razors edge on a sledgehammer sound. I may have just added too much high end.

Things are getting wellerer, I guess. Just very, very slowly.

Take care, my friend.
Aaron.
Evisma
Evisma 23rd Feb 2017 03:00 - 9 years ago

on Onward Toward Golgotha by ValveDriver
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Evisma 23rd Feb 2017 02:47 - 9 years ago

on Skyscaper by StaticNomad
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Evisma 10th Feb 2017 03:24 - 9 years ago

on To Keep You by Cestevens1783
Been a while.

This is very subdued, and your nearly always sad lyrics and delivery are in fine form. Strings are very effective for making that one loop not get too tired. Light percussion around 4:00 is very nice. Can't fault it, though I'd like to hear you get a hold of acoustic loop packs with several different guitar lines recorded in the same session, meant to all work together.

Good stuff.

Evan
Evisma
Evisma 6th Feb 2017 18:54 - 9 years ago

on Marching Orders by DK6025
Pretty intense! Good job conveying the aggression. Super heavy with some easier moments help with not getting too repetitive. All loops, but it's harder than one thinks. I can't do it.

After 6 years of no love on this track, I hope this bit of respect makes it good for another 6.

Evan
Evisma
Evisma 4th Feb 2017 20:29 - 9 years ago

on im gonna eat your by walram1
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Evisma 3rd Feb 2017 21:26 - 9 years ago

on ROCK N OUT (INTERLUDE)2 by EMONSTA
This is short, but awesome!

Every time I open the door and walk into my music room, this is the tune that goes through my head. I need it to play, triggered by a motion sensor, every time I go into the music room. Thank you for posting this,.... 9 years ago!
Evisma
Evisma 3rd Feb 2017 21:02 - 9 years ago

on -Rise by Musicante
This is damn good! Everything is well done and sounds professional, but the vocals are fantastic! Reminds me of Ghost Lit Kingdom.

Good stuff all around. Favorited.

Evan
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