aDeviantSexualInterest

Description : It's actually a short accapella, but do not yet have permission. I just needed somewhere to upload it so I can she the abominations- and hopefully some of my fellow loopers may even give me suggestions on what to improve[please don't mention the timing- it was half supposed to be half-off, and half the result or it being a first, unedited take].

Description : Help, please! This is just a snippet, but it's slightly more tolerable to the ear than my first try. Problem is, it doesn't seem like organ loop is lining up right, and I can't figure out why. Any ideas on what I'm doing wrong? I hope there's a way to make the loop work, 'cause it's exactly what I was looking for.

P.S.
Guitar and organ loop by MosReQuest

Description : Vocal draft for a song I don't know where to start with the musical part. If anyone want to offer advice, or even better- help, it's be more than apreciated.

Description : First song I've done that's actually starting to sound like music. Vocals were recorded before I put the music together, so hopefully once I feel like rerecording them it'll solve a few of the problems. The music in this one is almost solely composed of loops and sounds I got off of this site, with very little editing, so thanks to everyone who made such amazing loops! As always, any and all criticism/advice/slapsupsidethehide are welcome and appreciated! >:-D I feel like I'm making progress, but it's a long, hard road out of suckdom.

Loops used: Ghost in the Machine by MrRobot; Sigh Machine by Dert; Boogie Boogie Bass by Loopeytunes; and Twinket Riff by Twinket

Description : A VERY rough draft. This is my first attempt[or failure?] at adding music to my songs, so please ignore how painfully bad it is[though the chorus IS supposed to be slightly painful to listen to]. I don't know what to expect as a response, but I look forward and appreciate any and all criticism/advice, 'cause I have noooo idea what I'm doing. Just don't advise me to get a singer that DOESN'T suck>:-D 'Cause that $^@& is just something I gotta work through on my own.
Baseline's a loop from Rei[I'm sorry for abusing it so. Really, I am].