hobertni

I'll echo what my friend here already said. I think you're on your way up, and music has no ceiling. U can be as great as u want to be, if u put in the work. And that's exactly what this is, putting in the work. Keep at it, man. I'll check out whatever u post and follow how u progress. For now tho, focus on the consistency of ur bars, and you'll grow from good to great. See u round. -Aaron

It's cool homie the flow needs work. Theres phrases that are over extended. But I hear the confidence which most important. Keep it homie! Blaze up

Nice work bro.

Hello, a very nice guitar intro! You also did a very good job of selecting the other instruments used. You also recited the text very sensitively. The whole thing stands on a stable foundation of bass and drums. Very nice song!
That micro-bubble at 0:10, was that intentional?
Kind regards, Manuela

The force was with you on this one, or maybe it was the mushroom tea ... Bit of an ear worm this one. Cool lyrics too.

like that flow, nice bars and delivery, the beat is fresh chilled vibez too, the hook is fly hobertni

This is cool

Got that texas screw feeling

Legendary!

nice work bro snappy drums and good lines and flow vocal tone wasn't for me but thats just personal choice nice work

Absolute fire man. I'm not going to use it for anything I'm posting to the public because this is some insane stuff!

kdot beast

Everything is great, but I agree with Dime about the sudden stop, if I was me, I would use a subtle disc stop effect or something or the sort for the sudden stop, but also add maybe hits of the same effect or similar sounds throughout the track. Doesn't have to be a disc effect, but you get what I mean. For this the sudden stop I think is a negative without something to back it up.

nice work lads, good vocals nice pace and flow great guitar and the melody and beat are on point, you put work into it, you should revisit the finish though, the mix and mastering are good i dont mind straight stops but that was to abrupt, a lazy finish thats the last thing you here it needs to be as good as the intro

the lyrics are cool man, you and your friend both killed it. try and stay consistent with it and you'll be srt8. If you ever want free features hit my email, I make the same stuff. Also, www.goodhertz.com has a 30 day free trial on all their plugins, it will help the mixing process a lot.

Very nice soulful melodic rap. I like it very much! The ending is very abrupt. I think that's too blatant for this very melodic track. Otherwise, good mixing and mastering, very balanced.
Kind regards, Manuela

LMAO! That title says it all! This track was "Hard Hittin'" loved what u did with it, straight Fire! Fav'd,

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I like the guitar.

thats fire

thats fire

Dope!

awesome

That's Wonky!

Yes!!

Hello (ignore my name it's old) We at Jackal Studios want to put this song in our upcoming cyberpunk anime called UndaWorld we would like permission to use it with regard and credit I would also be happy to give you my discord that way you can join us with music production (we also need voice actors) moving along I await your reply...

love it