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24th May 2011 09:55 - 13 years ago
Description : This is another fun one I made, I recorded the vocals first and built the rest around it, I would have liked a rap in the middle, maybe someone could make one? Anyway hope you like...:) smiles

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If you have time take a listen and give marina41 some feedback.

Kgomotso
Kgomotso 25th Jul 2011 13:37 - 13 years ago
Cool stuff man. The vocal, beat and the sorounding sound great. Keep up the work. God bless
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 26th May 2011 15:47 - 13 years ago
I like the dissonance created by the vocals. You could almost take this one in other directions.....maybe break into a rock or metal approach in the middle of the song.....something that really kicks you know what.

And then bring it back from the brink.

Keep doing what you are doing. This is good work and has the potential to be great.

Bear
marina41
marina41 replied Unknown
Thanks Bear, I think you are right, I always thought something was missing in the middle, hence the mad sound effects part, a good old rock bit would be great, a work in progress...:) smiles thanks for the encouragement...
abnerbesares
abnerbesares 24th May 2011 16:55 - 13 years ago
Ther you GO marina ! nice to see you posting aging keep at it you will get Better as you go along always be open for tips anadvice from the felow member they love to help out! PEACE!
marina41
marina41 replied Unknown
Thanks my friend, I am liking this site, people are so friendly and helpful, I am greatly inspired by all the advice...big smile :)
Zelab
Zelab 24th May 2011 15:52 - 13 years ago
This needs a bit more work a bit more variation, and maybe cut the vox up or try finding more vocals by the same person saying different things.
marina41
marina41 replied Unknown
Thanks Zelab, first for the listen ans for the good advice, I agree there are not enough lyrics in it, I would have liked a rap in there somewhere actually to fill it out a bit :) smiles
Phyruis
Phyruis 24th May 2011 14:57 - 13 years ago
hhhmmm...some nice ideas brother....

I think some of those vocals could possibly be taken out because of the over all feeling of the track I don't think their as needed in the main as they are their are in the break down...

the drum track for me needs to be thickened either with layering loops or adding in one or two shots...also you need to mix it up a bit it tend to get a bit monotone... so some fills wouldn't go a miss..

over all a nice idea... I'm not into this hiphop based dance as most but I did enjoy the listen...

keep 'em coming brother
marina41
marina41 replied Unknown
He He shouldnt that be sister? Anyway thanks for looking i know this isnt your usual type of music, but, glad you listenend anyway. great advice, will take it on board, thanks a million :) smiles

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