Description : This is another fun one I made, I recorded the vocals first and built the rest around it, I would have liked a rap in the middle, maybe someone could make one? Anyway hope you like...:) smiles
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I like the dissonance created by the vocals. You could almost take this one in other directions.....maybe break into a rock or metal approach in the middle of the song.....something that really kicks you know what.
And then bring it back from the brink.
Keep doing what you are doing. This is good work and has the potential to be great.
Thanks Bear, I think you are right, I always thought something was missing in the middle, hence the mad sound effects part, a good old rock bit would be great, a work in progress...:) smiles thanks for the encouragement...
Ther you GO marina ! nice to see you posting aging keep at it you will get Better as you go along always be open for tips anadvice from the felow member they love to help out! PEACE!
Thanks Zelab, first for the listen ans for the good advice, I agree there are not enough lyrics in it, I would have liked a rap in there somewhere actually to fill it out a bit :) smiles
I think some of those vocals could possibly be taken out because of the over all feeling of the track I don't think their as needed in the main as they are their are in the break down...
the drum track for me needs to be thickened either with layering loops or adding in one or two shots...also you need to mix it up a bit it tend to get a bit monotone... so some fills wouldn't go a miss..
over all a nice idea... I'm not into this hiphop based dance as most but I did enjoy the listen...
He He shouldnt that be sister? Anyway thanks for looking i know this isnt your usual type of music, but, glad you listenend anyway. great advice, will take it on board, thanks a million :) smiles
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And then bring it back from the brink.
Keep doing what you are doing. This is good work and has the potential to be great.
Bear
I think some of those vocals could possibly be taken out because of the over all feeling of the track I don't think their as needed in the main as they are their are in the break down...
the drum track for me needs to be thickened either with layering loops or adding in one or two shots...also you need to mix it up a bit it tend to get a bit monotone... so some fills wouldn't go a miss..
over all a nice idea... I'm not into this hiphop based dance as most but I did enjoy the listen...
keep 'em coming brother