some nice ideas...

for me the loops seem a bit thin maybe if you layered them up... two versions one eq'd to act like a sub the other eq'd normally but take off the very top end it might give them a bit more depth...

your drum track needs to come down in the mix I'm hearing clipping probably coming from that kick... also I would layer that up too just to give the whole thing a little bit more shine..even alternate between two different kicks...one with a tale one without... even adding a bit of reverb on to the snare and the hats would add some extra character...

the ideas are good don't get me wrong...you just gotta work on getting a fuller more pro sound brother... post production it takes practice but you'll get there...

keep 'em coming brother

Nice one... like the way how you used loops in this track, and sounds good for me. Keep your good work Bobby!

Cheers!

WaPer

wow this is much better! keep up the good work :D

this is a pretty good use of loops and layered placement and im totally diggin it...but theres one little problem...2 minutes into the song there is a loop that just doesnt go well with the rest of the song..i really hope you dont hate me for saying that....other then that this is pretty good

Nice job Bobby! I too agree with minor on everything he said. It's tough man. I'm still trying to get my head around mixing and mastering. You def have a good start with this one. Rework it and blow us away!

~Ross

Ill second what Minor said, a nice background bass or sound would make everything else come out and don't be afraid to do some breaks also (avoid continuous drum patterns). Overall, nice beat!