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Original, DJ BlairRock, I like the synth in your track. Like the others, I think that the vocal are a bit to dry, maybe try with reverb or phaser, your software is bond to have one. Last thing: Your convertion to the dark-side of the dance music, is almost complete my young apprentice... ;)
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Man I dig this a lot. Good lyrics and solid singing. I agree with DV that the vocals need some room to breathe. A little Reverb ought to fix that right up. The vocals definitely make this track a lot more interesting. Good work. Now just blend them in with the rest of the track and you are gonna have something pretty cool going on. Peace and Love, Six

Goodness golly, oh miss Molly. Just do me a favor man, and never start singin in 'Tongues', haha. I tell you what, I was at this place once where that happened and it flat flipped me out.

So I was thinkin that this would be a pretty sweet song to be played on a Wednesday Youth Group meeting or something. You know, the part of it that's kinda like a party. I'm thinkin it'd be pretty jammin. Though I dunno exactly with the group I was a part of back in NC. It was more of an alt-rock crowd there.

One last thing before I bounce out. Maybe you could redo this and add some effects on the vocals to make 'em sound Spacey or something. I was also thinkin humor-wise on my sinister side, you could add some sample of a chick doing a horrendously bad fake orgasm, hahahahaha. Or not!? Later on mate!