Yes, cool RnB tune, i likr this preview!

Great beat, waiting for the full version ;)

The track is good guys.
It is a bit "commercial" but I think that was the intention.
The mix is polished enough.
Now you just need to put some vocals on it.
Good luck!
Ciao, Domenico

PS: I see from the past comments that you had one of the most beautiful voices of this site visiting you ... but I am sure you have already checked out the pellas section looking for inspiration so you already know her.

We are hoping people will just have a go at the chorus and see if they can do anything with it. We do not have any particular pattern in mind so just really wanted to give everyone an idea of the song (what the verses will be about). The words I put were just an example for the theme. if you think you can make some thing on it then please try and let me and pip see what we think. Think you might want to have a go? Cheers

Anomaly J, It's an moving one about trying to make it to the top against all odds. In the same molde as Emimen lose yourself or 8 mile Road. About trying to lose the demons of past life to give it one big shot and when there what it might be like.
Looking for a chorus which just bounces with Synth.
Think Pip wants the words Live it up. So adding to that something along the lines of "Live up it, fine that line lets hit it up, dont ever give up not the time to hide, time to say thanks for ride, win them all over to live it up." That jsut sprung to mind however peeps might get the idea of what I think might be needed. What you reckon Pip?