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30th Sep 2013 01:55 - 11 years ago
Description : Hi there! I'm here again after a long time! I've been really busy. The university takes all my time. Anyway. I'm here with my last "composition". Well, it's just a variation of the Canon in D major by Pachelbel. I called it "The Pachel's Heart", 'cause I used scales, like the beats of a heart. Ahm, I don't know anything about music theory, so... this song is a total mess! xD Ah! Sorry for the terrible quality. I didn't know how to fix it. This melody was made in Magix Music Maker 2013 Premium. I hope you like it! Thanks! SUN & MOON... FIRE & ICE HEART... LIGHT & DARK FUSION...

Comments (15)

If you have time take a listen and give SoraSolitudine some feedback.

GalanticMusic
GalanticMusic 24th Dec 2013 15:01 - 11 years ago
Wow real nice! i see what you were talking about, its kinda romantic and its filled with hapiness, lol, otherwise love your concept! but it required a bit of mixing with the sounds and to me some of the key tones needed jus a slight tweakin in my opinion. but GOOD JOB! well done!
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 16th Jul 2014 - 10 years ago
Sorry for the late reply... I hadn't read it.
Well, I have no a midi keyboard, so, you can figure that I made this melody, note by note, with the mouse.
For that reason I failed with the velocity.
Thanks very much for listening.

-S-
ScottFranco
ScottFranco 2nd Oct 2013 12:39 - 11 years ago
Ok, now your tugging at the heart strings. This is one of my favorite classical pieces. In fact, I did a version of it in March, 2012. I uploaded it to my collab site temporarily.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/148251

A little advise...You are going to get a bunch of the so called 'pros' telling you that you should do this, or do that. Screw them all! The only way you will lean is by doing. Of course you don't know what they are talking about...They are trying to impress you with big tech words. Just have fun and learn as you go. The piece of the link I included here is terrible, in my opinion, but I have learned much since than.

Anyway,

Cheers,
Scott
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 7th Oct 2013 - 11 years ago
Well, I guess you are right, maybe in some way; but I think that if there are people who know about this stuff (music), it would be good to learn a little from they.
And... about your Canon's version... well... I listened, and I like the strings and the piano solo :)
Anyway, I'm glad that you took your time to write a comment. It's significative to me.
Thanks for listening! :D
LightAs1Feather
LightAs1Feather 2nd Oct 2013 05:03 - 11 years ago
It makes my heart flutter! Love it :)
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 3rd Oct 2013 - 11 years ago
Thanks for listening! :D
beerling1970
beerling1970 1st Oct 2013 21:09 - 11 years ago
I could listen to this every day and all day long this is so beautiful.

Steve
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 1st Oct 2013 - 11 years ago
Awww! Thank you very much for listening! :D
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 1st Oct 2013 13:20 - 11 years ago
Hi Soleil,
You got already a lot of compliments here, and I can only add that you deserved all of them!
The song is "simple" but you already show good taste.
Keep going girl!
Ciao, Domenico
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 1st Oct 2013 - 11 years ago
Thank you very much for your words, Domenico.
Comments like yours are very significative to me.
Thanks! :D
deciBel
deciBel 1st Oct 2013 12:19 - 11 years ago
good to see U're back young tallented colleague Soraya .and when while listening to your nice piano I read your replY abouT being a selfthaughT who is learning music by herself's intelligence quotient , music even when there was no internet still and Islamc primitivism of this fascist regime of muslims in my motherhood land had forbidden for peoples to learn music , or sell & buy instruments even ,think this is worthy of greatest adoration,indeed .
Steve(first commenT) is a master abouT those things he has told & personallY I've learned aloT from him & I have np doubT soon U'll be unbelievable in music .best wishes.___Behnam
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 6th Oct 2013 - 11 years ago
Thank you very much for your words. And, well, I guess you're right about you tell. Until some time ago, there were things that were forbidden for women. I think they still exist. The thing is, I'd really like to learn music. You know, with a teacher, with someone who really knows of music.
Anyway, I'll keep practicing in the way I can.
Thanks for listening and comment! :D
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 1st Oct 2013 01:32 - 11 years ago
Gotta say i absolutely love cannon, and your retake on the track is very very nicely done! :)
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 1st Oct 2013 - 11 years ago
Thank you very much! :D
Cestevens1783
Cestevens1783 30th Sep 2013 23:34 - 11 years ago
I loved it. As being someone who also is very new with music and still in the learning process with everything and using software, working out the kinks etc, I think this is beautiful!!
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 30th Sep 2013 - 11 years ago
Thank you very much!
Well, This is only a try. I have to fix some details yet.
But I'm sure that all is about practicing.
Practicing makes the master.
Thanks again.
brillbilly
brillbilly 30th Sep 2013 23:05 - 11 years ago
I LOVE IT!

Gentle blissfull soothing!

It's a little gem!

Be proud little lady this is so sweet and so warming!

This made me want to dance in sunlight covered in white petals.!

Yeah i know...that's girly but what the hell lol
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 30th Sep 2013 - 11 years ago
Awww! Thank you very much!
I know this melody is a little sickly sweet, but this is the first try of a song made by myself entirely.
I hope I can make more.
Thanks for listening and comment! :D
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking 30th Sep 2013 15:03 - 11 years ago
Beautiful!
Really enjoyable - I'm hoping you get more time for music soon, although studies are perhaps more important for the moment (mom speaking =) ).
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 30th Sep 2013 - 11 years ago
Yes, I guess you and she (my mom) are right. And, I'm not saying that I'm uncaring about my studies. Actually I'm concentrating very much in them. I haven't had much time for art these weeks. The thing is, my mom thinks that art is a waste of time. She doesn't understand that art makes me feel alive. So, I can compose only in my free time.
Well, thank you for listening and comment! :D
DanGoldstein
DanGoldstein 30th Sep 2013 11:02 - 11 years ago
i thought i heard a harp - or was that still the piano at 2:17? we can learn a lot about harmony and styles by doing "tribute" pieces like this. it is a beautiful job. I did a "tribute" to Alban Berg (German 12-tone composer). It is called "12 tones in the Day" if you want to check it out. best of luck with your studies. keep sharing your music! cheers. Dan
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 30th Sep 2013 - 11 years ago
Yes, that was a harp.
Well, this song was only the first try. Pachelbel's Canon is one of the easiest pieces, so, it's not hard to learn the note pattern.
Maybe I could make my own songs. But it will take a long time, I guess...
I'll listen your track right now.
Thanks for listening and comment! :D
domr30
domr30 30th Sep 2013 06:33 - 11 years ago
tres belle melodie manque un peu d arrangement mais bien fait
domr
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 30th Sep 2013 - 11 years ago
Merci, I guess. Sorry, my native language is spanish and I can speak a little of english. I know that Soleil Lune are french words, but it's only my artistic name.
Thanks for listening! :D
Burtsbluesboxes
Burtsbluesboxes 30th Sep 2013 03:43 - 11 years ago
Beautiful :D Being such a metalhead when I was younger I never thought I'd have such an appreciation for such beautiful classical music that I have now :D Keep up the good work! Music theory is great and not as intimidating as it looks. After e few lessons it all starts to come together and make perfect sense. It's so easy it's sickening :O
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 30th Sep 2013 - 11 years ago
Thanks for your words! But... music is really difficult to learn. Well, it's difficult to me.
I can hear entire songs in my head, but I can't write them. I have no the knowledge.
So... I only do what I can.
Well, thanks for listening and comment! :D
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 30th Sep 2013 03:09 - 11 years ago
really pleasant Sunday evening listening over at my place...well done...and much enjoyed...Ed
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 30th Sep 2013 - 11 years ago
Thank you very much for listening! :D
srbrown7
srbrown7 30th Sep 2013 03:06 - 11 years ago
Lovely rendition of a suberb piece. My only feedback as to the quality is that it sounds that all notes are playing at the same velocity (loudness) which takes away dynamic range and touch. This can happen if you are using keyboard that is not touch sensitive or using the DAW interface. Try adjusting the velocity of individual notes to add more contrast to the sound. Also if you have an EQ on the master try EQing out the very top range 16,000 khz +
Keep up the good work
Steve
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine replied 30th Sep 2013 - 11 years ago
At first, thanks for listening and comment. I really appreciate it.
Well, I know nothing about music, I've never studied it, so... it's hard to me trying to understand what you mean with your comment.
I only "made" the song with the software. I have no more instruments/tools to make a better work.
I can't afford for music classes, my mom doesn't like that I "waste my time" with art.
I've tried to learn in internet, with no success. It's necessary a teacher.
I really thank you the criticism. I'll try to improve. I promise.
Thanks again for listening and comment.

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