nice track but the vocals are off

Hot track

thought this song would explode

Overall Production Of The Song Was Amazing. The Vocals Are A Bit Overproduced In My Opinion. A Lot Of Reverb, And Not Really Enough Performing Of Your Own. Other than that it's an awesome track you have here.

- Billion

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TuneDef when you get a chance, please listen to a new song i just upload. Title:" I wonder what it would have been like" Let me know your thoughts on it.

TuneDef, what can i say my man, awesome song !! I love your style, Great job!!!

What's up man. You know, in my life venture I have been in and out of a lot of studios. I have met many great musicians, famous and not so famous.

One good thing that I have learned from them, for example. You have 2 different people come in with their demos. One is professionally done and the other one is not. Which one do you choose?

I will choose the one that has the most feeling and meaning. I wouldn't care about the quality. That can come later.

This track you have here has a lot of potential. I love the melody and message. In time your mixing skills will get better. If you ever need some help don't be afraid to shoot me a private message.

Peace.

Steve aka Choppy.

I use hidden humor that you did not pick up. We in EU use hidden humor. So not disrespect intended.

You are right about music does not have rules and yet it does. It is a paradox. You build up the energy, and I was looking for the release of energy with a great chorus that did not come, so it made me feel extremely frustrated instead.

Be careful not to use the "no rules" as an excuse of not deliver a great chorus, so you could make this a great hit song.

The road to hell is paved with excuses of not deliver a good chorus!

Classical music has structure too and nature: http://www.demilked.com/amazing-nature-patterns/

I like this one. i started to turn up the volume and really get into it, but I also got frustrated. It was like having sex with a beautiful woman and then right, where I would get an orgasm nothing happened. I thought this song would explode into a totally amazing chores/hook around 1:20. I was fired up and ready to go. But where is the super amazing chores/hook??

The singing needs to be worked on too, then this could be a hit song for sure!

:)
oooommm..i think you still can sing better .
or maybe it needs a better mix !
i can't reallize some words in it -maybe cause
i'm not american-
donknow but the same i heared is nice too .
i especially enjoyed your composed vocal melody more
than everythings.
:)

Eh... it good, but could use more work. Its kinda like milk, but not quite a milkshake, you get me?

Awesome Tune....not necessary to repeat what other's have said about the vocals. I can't wait, though, to hear those lyrics. This tune sounds like something straight up Macy Gray's lane. You are definitely a singer, from the little I could hear near the end. Well done so far!

Love & Light,

Mykael

This is lovely. Nice work. However, couldn't hear words clearly at some point in the track. If you applied some reverb in the vocals track you may need to lower it a lil' bit. Otherwise its really cool to listen to this song. Big up.

first my ilolater respects to tallented DJ RYMZ for such a nice composition & elegantly arrangemenT , & then a great respect to your perceptional collab & lyriX .
& beside them all , I respectfully think U as singer are really good enough to sing with more aplomb & be sure about yourself that are the right person for best ( not a good one just )execution of yourself's nice lyrix & vocal melody composed . in music we say '' microphone doesn't lie '' , &
if U trust ( or also if U feel doubt about) yourself (more & still more than this ) in singing & expression of the words , listener will be influenced by your trust or doubT as a reflexive reaction in their mind .
many thnx or sharing your symmetric comprehension with colleague DJ RYMZ as this collab with us .best wishes.___Behnam

Hi

The vocals and the arrangment are very well matched aufeinender.

Listening to the tracks was pleasure :-)

Greetings Bathers

Very different and unique track!
I especially love the instrumentals that are very enchanting and create a very special mood for the song. :) I liked it

the voice is beautiful over this track. enjoy the vocal mixing also - nice effects. congrats on your work! peace.

Great job bro. Good instrumental as well. Top job.

Pretty good TuneDef ;)
like how you did the vocal improvisation on this track ;)

some sweet ideas here that have potential. just needs a little more work.
i read you are not a singer, however it seems like you could easily become one.
you got a smooth vocal character and already sing in tune pretty neatly most of the time.
in case you plan to hone your singing skills more i recommend you check out some vocal training instruction videos on youtube. some excellent theories and techniques explained there.

mix-wise it feels like the voice is not prominent enough and you could increase the gain on the dry signal more (i.e. make it less drowned in the effects and other sounds).
what did you use to record and apply the effects?
did you insert the reverb effects directly into the dry signal or did you split the signal and mix the effect part in via sends?

Hello, I'm surpprised of the work done here. you do sing good but the only prob was that you put too much of spatials effects on the vox making the beat more present than the vocals. And about the whole song you did gave a good impression and you totally implemented the concept i had in mind but likewise you didn't follow the song patterning i.e: Intro-verse-chorus...apart from all this factors you did a great professional job. we can do good things working together.

DJ RYMZ.

Listening to this track was a thrill in deed. I love your vocal improvisation. Kinda like you're open-jamming with yourself! LOL. Excellent job!

Love & Light

Nice track TD.
As ronabo pointed out the vocals are very reminiscent of Aaron Neville who is an RnB icon. Concentrate on Enunciation and singing those words clearly bro. I really enjoyed this track, looking forward to hearing more from you.

I think the track was good, but it for sure could have been much better. I hear too much of the beat and your vocals hide in the mix. You should work on bringing them up more and leveling them out so you get a smooth even sound. This was cute tho! keep on making hits!

Much love

Vance B.

Really good man. Your skills were made for this song. Love it. I was taping my toes. Easy listen. Good job.

yo bro you remind me of JJ fish his blowing up in the game right now, good job keep going hard bro, i like it

great job i feel this man. you have so much talent

Sounds Good! Kindof reminded me of that Aaron Nevells singer. :) Keep moving forward!

Ronabo
RonaboSoul Productions

Not bad at all!:)

Cheers___Orlando