Mate,
Every time you listen to it sound better than last time.
Brilliant.
Jamid

Incredible!
It's people like you on here that have me listening to enjoying and appreciating so many different genres and approaches to music.
I first turned up here because there were some good quality free loops available and wasn't even aware of this part of it for a long time.
It's now my main radio station!
I still find it hard to believe an amateur mostly hobby site can be turning out stuff like this.
Hats off to you and your hard work.
So many talented people on here.

Hey Mos!
I know this track has been here a while but i haven't been here that long, so i give you my thoughts now, and go through the others whenever i can;)
Bro this really good one of the best tracks i heard on this site so far( i haven't heard as much as you but still), the percussion is awesome and that bass man is top! although feels a little low in volume to me but i understand you want the vocal to be the focus.
The vocals are amazing, beautiful voice and great lyrics.
Well done with the piano and that distant pad is just spot on.
Nice work my friend you got some serious talent.

PS: I just read the review you done on mudhoen's track,
man that was deep, hat's off to you for helping him out, good man.

Best Regards
WB

Hey mosaic
well i never heard the early evolutions of this track and pop is not really my forte but i like the song the vocals are great very powerful and the mix all seems where it should be
good work man

:P

Mosaic,
Wow wow mate,
You know how I love your work say no more.
Favs……it goes
Jamid

This song has a lovely beat to it, and the lyrics are divine. Well done! ^_^

100%... great track, I LOVE the bassline!!!
Very nice vocals too... you're getting from your comfortzone very well :)

Fav!

TCAS

Bonjour Estefano ....

It is sometimes complex to be able to mix and arrange several musical sources.
I listened here several times what you have achieved, and I am impressed by your "work" ....
This is really good, and also very professional ....
All the intrumentations are in place and the voice is very distinct.
I'm really impressed with your concept .... Yes! very good realisation.

You are like a good wine, you you enhanced with time.

Dan

I like the chill vibe and the whole track sounds great. My only criticism is that there seems like there should be more of a build up in the section of the song where most of the audio drops out at the end. Other than that, I'm a fan.

Radio Ready
Great mix
Nice Arrangement
Kudos
B

Sounds like you moved the vocals from my earlier listen. Sounds good, are you happy with it? I still dig the vocal track. Glad you finished it up, now it's on to the next one bud.

Well, I'm sorry my friend for not listening to this earlier, I guess it's good to hear a version that's more perfected. And it really does sound pretty much perfect! I don't really notice any more timing issues on this version. It's pop music, so I'm not going to go to far on critisism, as it's not in line with my listening preferences. I enjoyed the piano parts very much, and the drums seemed very appropriate. Definitely sounds like it could be a popular one! Great work!

Well it's good to see you've got some intelligent and helpful feedback on this. I don't see enough of that on this site, more's the pity. It should be one of the key aspects of this place. My record is six separate comments on one guy's track as he uploaded different versions, making improvements each time.

Anyway, I'm hardly a pop music fan (though of course love undeniably great stuff such The Beatles and Michael Jackson) but this sounds good to me.

I've read a little on the vocal problems you had but they seem to have all been fixed so well done with sticking at it.

Fairly chilled out but uptempo beat with a neat little bassline. Nothing to interfere with the vocals, which are the main focus. Kicking straight off with the vocals works just fine.

Quite a 'pop' sounding drum kit.

0:30 extra percussion makes think of sleigh/jingle bells. Maybe it's a tambourine.

Piano supports the vocal well and the pad provides some chillout vibe.

Ah, 1:49 I found a tiny little vocal pop 'error' (during 'them') though I imagine most people wouldn't notice it (I only have my ears so can't be sure).

And another one on 1:10 but that's probably a (lack of) pop shield problem on the vocal recording. Very minor point!

I guess the track's quite samey in terms of instrumentation but that's fine for this sort of music as it's all really about supporting that vocal so I think you've done a good job.

I've listened to this about 4 times now and I agree with a previous comment that it sounds like radio quality.

These timing issues can sometimes be a real pain, as you found out. The problem is if you move something like vocals a half step in front of the beat or a half step behind, it really does make things sound a whole lot different. In the business we call that syncopation. Some music is designed for syncopation, others not so much. But you persevered and the end result really is well done, and hopefully worth it on your end. This is a solid track, well mixed, nicely balanced, and a real pleasure to listen to. Thanks for letting me lend you my ancient ears, hahaha. I hope all is well.

Bear

Haven't heard how far you've come, Mossy, but it sounds like radio quality, BUT on my end the chorus seems to jump the music at parts. By the way, love the chilled out instrumental!

Definitely, well worth is psycho fits, lol.

Bro, I have to give you major props for sticking with it and trying to make the vox work. And they do in spots, especially from the 2:38 mark to the end. But the verses are just not quite in synch through the first 2:38 of the song. My advice, the music is outstanding, so perhaps keep only the chorus parts, or just get rid of the vocals altogether. Instead of trying to mesh the vox into the track, perhaps change to a synth lead or something and not worry about the vocals. As I said, the backing track is outstanding. The vox are what are really throwing this one off. Kudos for your determination. I admire your tenacity. I would have given up a long time ago. I hope all is well and that the hair is growing back in the spots this song made you pull, haha.

Bear

Ok right at the 30 second mark. Go into Acid and make the measure margins to 64th or 128th notes. there you can manipulate the vocal loop to be just a hare forward. I hear the vocals starting just a little bit soon. Play with that and you will see (hear) what works for this track. It's a great track, just needs the sync of the vox. I think the tempo is ok for the vox, just needs to fit the beat. Your gonna get it right soon, I believe that!
Steve

Sounds like this one was giving you fits, lol. I am listening to a newer and revised version I would guess. It sounds fine to me. To me the vocals seem to come in on the "and" between 1 and 2 as you are counting it off. I can see why it would be tricky lining up the vocals. Adding vocals adds a new dimension to the mix, literally. I have tried using some a capellas that were just a little off timed and it was tough, I had to chop them up to get them to fit properly.

The music is fine, upbeat, dig the piano here. Bouncy cool bass. On listen 3 now. I like the delay on the vocals. Cool pop track, a bit towards the dance end of the spectrum. I like it, dig the woman's vocals, they add a nice touch.

Well done, hope you are satisfied with it! Sound good for a new genre you are trying out.

Wayne

Urgh I feel so frustrated for you. X3
You did a good job of the music but again it's the vocals that are letting this down, I think they're not synced right or something? I don't know. But if you get them to fit perfectly; you sir will have a really nice track on your hands! But yeah the syncing is honestly the only negative thing I can say about this. Everything else is good. :)

Ok now that you have synched.. there is still a disjoint. try delaying the vox slightly to to the beats as it still sounds just a hare off. what loop program are you using? FL or Acid. The vocals sound almost a slight bit rushed to these ancient ears and I think if you adjust with just a hare trigger to the future they would match better. Please let me know...this is good work and has great potential.
Steve

really like this one a lot. has very catchy sound to it. you did a very well on the production on the whole track, good work.

I really like what you are doing here. But My spider sense tells me that at some points the rhythm is hurried in comparison to the vocals. Maybe you would want to re visit the timing of the vocals to the beats.
But I like where you are going with this. It has great potential.
Steve

Nice pop track mate. The vocal fits perfectly, the music is all on point and it has breakdowns in all the right places. Could this be a sign that your mellowing out in your old age lol?
I enjoyed this piece of radio friendly music.
FR

nice song my friend...i like the vocals...i think it works well with the track...i did not listen to the first version but the drum sounds ok...its nice to see you doing other genres...i know how that feels like...good job :)

In my humble opinion this is a full professional track...the drum is well balanced for my taste, the vocs and the synths are working fine together, mix is king, so this chill pop track is on the highest limit...

Congrats, Danke

Good song has all the elements, nice voice she has I do find the drums
EQ is a little top loaded and a touch too much up front, her voice should
control the front line not the drums...

Otherwise this is a very nice piece of work ....

Peace...TG.

Sounds alright. I would lower the drums so they are not that dominant because she has a lovely voice and it has a strange energy with so dominant drums. But that is just me.

Why not let people download the track? At this step we all need promotion and one way is to give away for free.