You have some nice sounds going on ...could use a bit of bass or maybe some sub-bass hits to fill in that low end that R&B really works well for....sounds fine but I found it quite repetitive with the same basic key prog all the way...maybe a couple of change-ups in the progression or tack in a key change market etc would kick it up a bit...keep it going...you got that basics laid out ...its going to be good...Ed

OK, I liked the track a lot. I agree it probably could be improved by adding a bass to it. Doesn't have to be really prominent in the mix. If this were my track, I'd try just following the root of the backing chords with a single note baseline, with the bass mixed down so that it doesn't complete with the BD.

If it were my track, I'd experiment to see if using different sounds for the backing chords and the strings part might bring something different to the track. i'm not crazy about the sounds, but I tend to like fairly traditional R&B instrumentation. Those are just my reactions.

I do like the track and I agree with centralsdev that it would be really interesting to hear an acapella laid on it.

it's a good feeling listening to this. the synths are sweet and the strings give it a bit of a nostalgic touch. I imagine you are still thinking about an ending or continuing the track. lots of places you could go with it. congrats on your work. best of luck. Dan

nice work smooth track i agree with ssrecords could use some bass give it more depth nicely done good job

Nice track sound real good put some words, to this and make them
real...Could be a solid piece of work, the track is all ready...

Peace...TG.

this is a cool track but,it needs a bass it doesn't seem like R&B without a bass an a cool melody..bass and the melody drives the track ...just my opinion

Peace
Ice man

woah. those hush sounds at 1:05 are trippy! nice work

try put a acplla on it.