Description : I had this acapella from Musicmansaul99 https://www.looperman.com/users/profile/876685 and created an instrumental around it - just throwing it out there to hear if anybody has anything to say about it. 3 drum loops used, other than those it's all made by me in FL10.
Very solid track you've made here. I love the energy of the intro. Very layered and complex and the sounds get on really well. I'd like to mirror soundhound's suggestion to get a rolling bass somewhere in the mix.
Hey thanks!
I'm not that good at creating a bass line but I'll give it a try tomorrow.
Also hearing the lack of it and some other flaws I'll try to correct.
I don't know if it's just me but I could've sworn I could hear some clipping in the mix. Gotta be careful there. But the piano is very beautiful! And the vocal is mixed beautifully with everything else! Not too busy, which I definitely like! Keep it up, SJ :) Look forward to hearing more!
Hello ER - there could very well be some clipping.
The drum thing is taking a lot of space in the mix and I did EQ and pan it and all the other sounds but I also turned up the volume when rendering...not the most genious thing to do.
Going to work some more on this I hope and add some bass etc. and check the levels more closely. Just that the computer with the daw in it is behaving badly...it could die any minut. =D
Thanks for listening and leaving a comment, you talented young man.
I like your nick name! =D
And also your music, just listened to the more mellow rock type of a track you have up here the other day and enjoyed it very much but didn't have the chance to log in and tell you at the time.
The piano here is just notes or not even notes, just dots placed on the piano roll and they sound kind of weird on their own actually but somehow they melt in anyway. I like them a lot my self though.
Very Cool track... It really needs Bass rolling on the bottom
would put a lock on the groove...
Voices are in a good place and sound good, the Keys keep
the hole track moving in a solid way...
But a thumping bass would save the day.... :-)
And a Guitar with something little to say...
Hi TG, yes the bass!! Always forget about it somehow...going to try to add some and sort it out.
There is a "guitar"(synth plug-in) in there but it doesn't talk enough I guess, it had nothing much to say. Maybe adding some more of that too.
Thanks for pointing these things out!
Peace right back at you =) / SJ
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I'm not that good at creating a bass line but I'll give it a try tomorrow.
Also hearing the lack of it and some other flaws I'll try to correct.
Take care, cheers/ SJ =)
I don't know if it's just me but I could've sworn I could hear some clipping in the mix. Gotta be careful there. But the piano is very beautiful! And the vocal is mixed beautifully with everything else! Not too busy, which I definitely like! Keep it up, SJ :) Look forward to hearing more!
ER
The drum thing is taking a lot of space in the mix and I did EQ and pan it and all the other sounds but I also turned up the volume when rendering...not the most genious thing to do.
Going to work some more on this I hope and add some bass etc. and check the levels more closely. Just that the computer with the daw in it is behaving badly...it could die any minut. =D
Thanks for listening and leaving a comment, you talented young man.
Cheers/ SJ =)
And you go girl! The only way is up.
Cheers/ SJ =)
really nice work !
And also your music, just listened to the more mellow rock type of a track you have up here the other day and enjoyed it very much but didn't have the chance to log in and tell you at the time.
The piano here is just notes or not even notes, just dots placed on the piano roll and they sound kind of weird on their own actually but somehow they melt in anyway. I like them a lot my self though.
Thanks a lot for listening and commenting!
would put a lock on the groove...
Voices are in a good place and sound good, the Keys keep
the hole track moving in a solid way...
But a thumping bass would save the day.... :-)
And a Guitar with something little to say...
Peace...TG.
There is a "guitar"(synth plug-in) in there but it doesn't talk enough I guess, it had nothing much to say. Maybe adding some more of that too.
Thanks for pointing these things out!
Peace right back at you =) / SJ