Danke is a great and talented songwriter and a very humble person.You did justice to his work.
I hope he gets to listen to this song soon.

Great work.

Nelson

Well I faved and DLed this track and I feel guilty if I didn't leave some feedback as well lol.

But damn man Im becoming a fan of your work. Thing is for me, if you have a good/unique flow and clear/powerful delivery but awful lyrics (kind of like mainstream hip hop for the most part nowadays) I can listen to it maybe once or twice but I quickly lose interest. But you my friend have got all three top notch. Your overall style and skill is up there on the loop in terms of the rap department.

You used the third verse in this track for that collab with SJW but I love it in both cuz of the different emotion and speed in the delivery. Plus the lyrics are super clever, deep, and very rhythmic. Its almost like even though your saying the same thing the difference in the delivery and music give it its own uniqueness its own story.

Excellent Work!

Just had to comment on this track, Mr. Word. I really enjoyed it. It is a great backing track from Danke and your rhymes are, as I am quickly learning, intelligent and engaging. I am VERY impressed.

Regreetings, Mr Word.

"i find myself appreciating your input more than most anyone else on this site"

That's nice to hear and a few other people have said something similar. One guy's even sent me PMs a couple of times asking me to review particular tracks. There have also been a couple who have given me outright abuse for my track reviewing style quite a few times. I guess a couple of hateful/mentally ill individuals out of the hundreds I've reviewed isn't too bad going.

As regards a collaboration; that is possible though I'm quite nervous and apprehensive about such a thing as so many things can go wrong and have in the past with people I actually know. Never collaborated online or with someone I didn't personally know before.

However, after your suggestion, I had a look at a couple of short (2 min) work-in-progress tracks that might suit you (ie ones with a hip hop vibe). I found a couple of potnetially suitable ones so will do a bit of work on them in the next few days and then find a way for you to hear them. Then you can tell me if you feel inspired and can contribute something vocally. If so, I'd have to like it and then I could work your vocals into the arrangement and build the track up around the vocal plus probably try out some fun vocal FX work, add some other instrumentation and so on.

I'd be nervous about sending anyone a version of my tracks so would just ask that you don't do anything with them (and probably eventually delete them). I'd just send low quality MP3s (ie 128K) but they'll be fine to rap over.

If we do end up with a completed track or tracks, I'll always want to be able to do whatever I want with it (ie put it on whichever album I choose) and I'd extend the same courtesy/right to you. So, you can put it on whatever album/EP/mixtape of yours.

Let me know if that all sounds OK and I'll get on with finishing up these short demos and posting them online (probably Soundcloud) for you to hear.

Word up, WordyB.

I'm very impressed with what you've done with this track.

In fact, you've made me more greatly appreciate the original, which I first thought was decent but nothing special.

I can see how this would have been a therapeutic experience as the chill vibe is deep in this one.

I'm not really one for analysing raps so can't offer much thought there though I can say I enjoy many of the lines. "The music made me" is a good one.

Intelligent lyrics though I think you pretty much always have them.

Big congrats!

hi. wow! what a fantastic collab. I really like what you did here. danke's track gets even more funky now with your vocals haha. Somehow that little sax solo would probably fit better somwhere in the middle of the track instead (to me:) but anyway this is some very nice vocal take!

Few weeks ago I downloaded your another track titled 'them-lovely-bones', very funky number but there was far too much of collab action happening at that time to work on this track.
I am working currently on some other idea from ferryterry but that particular one was really cool. Are you still interested in developing that older project? I might try to create a solo section on keys and ask ferryterry for some guitar lines as well.

Again very impressive work on this one. I will check out some of your other tracks.

Best to you, Alex

Hello Wordy Bum

When i heard Dankes track, i realy loved it and when i listen to this one you uploaded here, i have to say - Wow -

I am realy not a big fan of rap but everything fits realy good to Dankes song. It sounds like you both worked together a long time to do this one. And thats means that YOU done a very good work.

Like i sayed, i am not a rap fan but i enjoyed the listen to this little piece of music very much.

Respect man!

stay tuned
joe

wwow nice, I love this original one from danke, and the vocals make it even better :D awesome man!

You did this nice, touch of class in your style very well done....

Peace...TG.