Description : UPDATED( again lol ) : Made some more changes, thank you guys for the help making this better.
Vocals By: EpicRecord
Best Regards
WB
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Great job Woozy. You really improved this track. It sounds much better now. Every sound has its place and it makes this ound really stand out. Great production!
Hey mudhoen!
Thank you 4 the support and for coming by to listen again.
I can only thank you guys for the amazing help here, i very much appreciate it.
Don't ever feel bad asking for some feedback, that's what we are here for, it is a pleasure to help you guys out, allows me to give something back for the help I receive here 6 years ago when I joined, plus I can learn more while helping out, you should check out the review I did for mudhoen earlier today, please do mate, longest review I have ever done on site lol...a novel...OK on to the track, on second listen, mate you have got this so MUCH better, have kicked volume right up with headset on for this second listen to see if any distortion, think you have nailed it now mate, I personally wouldn't change anything now my friend, good on my friend for keeping at it, pleased I could help in a small way to get this sorted for you, been enjoyable...If I could double fv I would...Like say please don't hesitate to ask via contact if you are stuck, if I can help, I will try my best...Peace n Respect friend...PS thank you for your thoughts in msg, means a lot mate...Just thought would have 3rd listen mate before posting review, this has come along in leaps and bounds...from here this is all GOOD...Mos...
Thanks Mos!
I really appreciate all the feedback and the follow up.
You really went out of your way to help out and as a result the track is a lot better so i very much thank for it.
We all need feedback and if something sounds wrong is always good to know so it can be improved.
I'm glad you feel it's good now, but you know for me it will never be quite right for some reason, it happens with most of my sounds lol, but i think i will leave it as it is for now.
This has been fun, i learned a lot as always.
If there's anything i can do for you just give me a buzz ;)
Back for another listen even looking at wave form you can tell it has less distortion, this so much better but still seems like a little distortion in some parts, I think it is more the choice of a synth?? or something like that, it comes in at the 58 seconds, everything from here sounds so much better but when that part comes in through out track, it does sound distorted, maybe it needs to go further down in the mix, or maybe it is not same key as rest of the track??? From this end personally I would remove it, as I don't think track needs it...Just my thoughts my friend, like said major improvement, on second listen now, yes believe that is what is causing the grief here, also I think the same problem at 58 sec mark is affecting the vocals coming through better in the mix...The piano that comes in at the 2.45 sec mark would sound great in place of what you have happening at the 58 sec point...Sorry friend to bring bad tidings...Like before mate if you change pls msg so I can come back again, like said last night this piece has so much potential to become a very nice piece indeed...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
Hi brother!
Thanks again for chipping in i really respect that.
I think that the distortion on that synth was me pushing the distortion a bit too much, since i bounced it to audio (i do that a lot to save CPU as mine is weak) it's actually embedded on the sound it self, i will try to place the piano you mentioned instead to hear how it sounds, if all else fails i will probably redo that part of the track.
"Sorry friend to bring bad tidings"
All you have done is help so no need for apologies or feeling bad about it, it's all good;)
I'm not a pro and still have a lot to learn, my music is mostly experimental so i'm bound to fail ( until i get it right), no shame in that.
"Like before mate if you change pls msg so I can come back again"
You're a legend honestly.
Fiest of all, great track. Very creative approach and it has a nice swing to it. Only thing is tghat the track is too loud. The instruments and voice are fighting for the frequencies. The bass is too loud and gives distortion. Lower it with an equalizer or put a limiter on it. I love this track and I believe after some few tweaks it will sound very hefty!
Mate very creative with this one, listening with head phones something I don't normally do when reviewing, as normally to lazy to go inside and get but for you I have done just that, to get a closer listen, there does seem to be a fair amount of distortion in the mix, making it sound a little muddy, not really sure what you have to do to fix the distortion, guessing others with more experience here would know for sure to help you out my friend,but reckon would lift track clarity a lot if you know how to adjust it, vocal sounds great, nice tone...As others have mention, could come to the fore a little more, as it does seem to get lost in some area's, don't know if that's because of the distortion??
Hats off to you friend on the arrangement, totally love it, great choice of synths, working extremely well with the beat and vocals...Please let me know via contact tab, when you sort this one out, as I would really love to hear it again, when it has adjustments made...Thinking this could be a very impressive track when right...Peace n much Respect WB...Mosaic...
Hi Mosaic!
It's always good to hear from you, thank you for reviewing and i really appreciate you going a step further!
After reading the comments i went on and tackled some of the problems this afternoon already, indeed there was quite a lot of distortion, i guess after listening to it so many times one stops being able to detect some problems, that's why is great that a site like this exists with people willing to help ;)
Anyways I changed the intro and made a few changes here and there then mixed and mastered it again, after export i compared them and it's much better, is not so loud and feels more compact.
I will upload it soon and will let you know.
Thank you again for the feedback.
Best Regards
WB
Hello,
This track very good, creatively laid out .
Nice dance, however; your gain is too high that at the top end there is a distortion.
Maybe it should be a touch lower this is my view though.
It’s great job though.
Jamid
"This track very good, creatively laid out "
Thank you, I'm happy that you like it.
"your gain is too high that at the top end there is a distortion"
Thanks for the heads up :) i do use distortion on most of my sounds so maybe that's why?
However i might have pushed that Limiter a bit too far, Dam Loudness War.
Thank you very much for you review and constructive criticism, i really appreciate that ;)
the vocal need to be abit higher some place it get low, and if you used reverb you should remove it, and the trak could be a bit higher volume. other then that i feel like running while i listen to this :D
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Best Regards.
WB
Love that messing with the voice at 3.00.
Many thanks for taking the time to listen to my music.
I'm glad you like it.
Best Regards
WB
Thank you 4 the support and for coming by to listen again.
I can only thank you guys for the amazing help here, i very much appreciate it.
Best Regards
WB
Don't ever feel bad asking for some feedback, that's what we are here for, it is a pleasure to help you guys out, allows me to give something back for the help I receive here 6 years ago when I joined, plus I can learn more while helping out, you should check out the review I did for mudhoen earlier today, please do mate, longest review I have ever done on site lol...a novel...OK on to the track, on second listen, mate you have got this so MUCH better, have kicked volume right up with headset on for this second listen to see if any distortion, think you have nailed it now mate, I personally wouldn't change anything now my friend, good on my friend for keeping at it, pleased I could help in a small way to get this sorted for you, been enjoyable...If I could double fv I would...Like say please don't hesitate to ask via contact if you are stuck, if I can help, I will try my best...Peace n Respect friend...PS thank you for your thoughts in msg, means a lot mate...Just thought would have 3rd listen mate before posting review, this has come along in leaps and bounds...from here this is all GOOD...Mos...
I really appreciate all the feedback and the follow up.
You really went out of your way to help out and as a result the track is a lot better so i very much thank for it.
We all need feedback and if something sounds wrong is always good to know so it can be improved.
I'm glad you feel it's good now, but you know for me it will never be quite right for some reason, it happens with most of my sounds lol, but i think i will leave it as it is for now.
This has been fun, i learned a lot as always.
If there's anything i can do for you just give me a buzz ;)
Best Regards
WB
Back for another listen even looking at wave form you can tell it has less distortion, this so much better but still seems like a little distortion in some parts, I think it is more the choice of a synth?? or something like that, it comes in at the 58 seconds, everything from here sounds so much better but when that part comes in through out track, it does sound distorted, maybe it needs to go further down in the mix, or maybe it is not same key as rest of the track??? From this end personally I would remove it, as I don't think track needs it...Just my thoughts my friend, like said major improvement, on second listen now, yes believe that is what is causing the grief here, also I think the same problem at 58 sec mark is affecting the vocals coming through better in the mix...The piano that comes in at the 2.45 sec mark would sound great in place of what you have happening at the 58 sec point...Sorry friend to bring bad tidings...Like before mate if you change pls msg so I can come back again, like said last night this piece has so much potential to become a very nice piece indeed...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
Thanks again for chipping in i really respect that.
I think that the distortion on that synth was me pushing the distortion a bit too much, since i bounced it to audio (i do that a lot to save CPU as mine is weak) it's actually embedded on the sound it self, i will try to place the piano you mentioned instead to hear how it sounds, if all else fails i will probably redo that part of the track.
"Sorry friend to bring bad tidings"
All you have done is help so no need for apologies or feeling bad about it, it's all good;)
I'm not a pro and still have a lot to learn, my music is mostly experimental so i'm bound to fail ( until i get it right), no shame in that.
"Like before mate if you change pls msg so I can come back again"
You're a legend honestly.
Best Regards
WB
It's much better now.
Best regards
WB
Mate very creative with this one, listening with head phones something I don't normally do when reviewing, as normally to lazy to go inside and get but for you I have done just that, to get a closer listen, there does seem to be a fair amount of distortion in the mix, making it sound a little muddy, not really sure what you have to do to fix the distortion, guessing others with more experience here would know for sure to help you out my friend,but reckon would lift track clarity a lot if you know how to adjust it, vocal sounds great, nice tone...As others have mention, could come to the fore a little more, as it does seem to get lost in some area's, don't know if that's because of the distortion??
Hats off to you friend on the arrangement, totally love it, great choice of synths, working extremely well with the beat and vocals...Please let me know via contact tab, when you sort this one out, as I would really love to hear it again, when it has adjustments made...Thinking this could be a very impressive track when right...Peace n much Respect WB...Mosaic...
It's always good to hear from you, thank you for reviewing and i really appreciate you going a step further!
After reading the comments i went on and tackled some of the problems this afternoon already, indeed there was quite a lot of distortion, i guess after listening to it so many times one stops being able to detect some problems, that's why is great that a site like this exists with people willing to help ;)
Anyways I changed the intro and made a few changes here and there then mixed and mastered it again, after export i compared them and it's much better, is not so loud and feels more compact.
I will upload it soon and will let you know.
Thank you again for the feedback.
Best Regards
WB
This track very good, creatively laid out .
Nice dance, however; your gain is too high that at the top end there is a distortion.
Maybe it should be a touch lower this is my view though.
It’s great job though.
Jamid
Thank you stopping by ;)
"This track very good, creatively laid out "
Thank you, I'm happy that you like it.
"your gain is too high that at the top end there is a distortion"
Thanks for the heads up :) i do use distortion on most of my sounds so maybe that's why?
However i might have pushed that Limiter a bit too far, Dam Loudness War.
Thank you very much for you review and constructive criticism, i really appreciate that ;)
Best Regards
WB
"the vocal need to be abit higher some place it get low"
Thank you for pointing it out to me ;)
"and if you used reverb you should remove it"
You really don't like reverbs lol ,anyway i don't use a lot in this track only slightly on the vocal.
"and the trak could be a bit higher volume"
Definitely.
"other then that i feel like running while i listen to this :D"
In A good way i hope, but either way if that's the case you should probably run lol
Best Regards
WB