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6th Jul 2015 17:38 - 9 years ago
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Description : Just something I started working on and thought others might like to listen to. If anyone has suggestions on how the song should progress, let me know.

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If you have time take a listen and give Jmanshizzil some feedback.

GrandSuburb
GrandSuburb 8th Sep 2015 23:17 - 9 years ago
Nice clean production, well put together.
ash87
ash87 27th Aug 2015 00:04 - 9 years ago
love this track!!!!
priomghosh007
priomghosh007 14th Aug 2015 09:37 - 9 years ago
nice one
Sefgrt
Sefgrt 6th Aug 2015 13:34 - 9 years ago
Amazing
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 11th Aug 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you :)
TFrye
TFrye 14th Jul 2015 08:25 - 9 years ago
nice work
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 21st Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Thanks!!!!!
DJNESHH
DJNESHH 12th Jul 2015 14:25 - 9 years ago
awesome track downloading now seems amazing
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 13th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you! It means a lot!
mstmusic
mstmusic 9th Jul 2015 19:24 - 9 years ago
Hello, are you looking for a collab for this? I think I really feel this tune as it's kind of trance I'm keen on. I could add some pretty nice things if you work on FL Studio. Contact me if it's possible :)
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 13th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
I'm always looking to work with others!
KLAUS7
KLAUS7 8th Jul 2015 22:24 - 9 years ago
i would say it could use some club build up mix but original is good for chill out
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 13th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Thanks for the feedback!
XyIlent
XyIlent 8th Jul 2015 14:51 - 9 years ago
hey, i really like this. Sounds awesome. maybe like a Kygo-esq dance song.
If your looking for some suggestions - its a tiny bit repetitive maybe adding an extra melody towards the end will keep peoples attention a bit more.. but thats just my thoughts :)

respect
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 8th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Yeah I was thinking the same as far as repetitiveness goes. Thanks for the kind words! and I appreciate the feedback!
Deadlyawake
Deadlyawake 8th Jul 2015 10:58 - 9 years ago
Hi nice song
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 8th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you!!
SimplicityBeats
SimplicityBeats 7th Jul 2015 21:16 - 9 years ago
killer
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 8th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Thanks!
ryansexmoney
ryansexmoney 7th Jul 2015 02:38 - 9 years ago
love!
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 7th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you! I appreciate it!
INFLOW
INFLOW 7th Jul 2015 01:05 - 9 years ago
Pretty much what ShurelyTemper said but I have to say that I'm loving what you've got so far. The sounds you've made are chill as heck which I love and that kick and clap is very nice
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 7th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Thanks so much! I'll work on getting the song composition a little more in line.
ShurelyTemper
ShurelyTemper 6th Jul 2015 19:58 - 9 years ago
Hi jman. I can suggest a few ideas. Keep the main arp back for introduction at a slightly later part of the track. Start out with kick, snare, then bass, get a groove going then lead us into your main melody but don't give it all up so soon. Chop the main arp melody down into chunks & loop to tease us. But bring it in at the first major break, and defo get the real rhythm in earlier. finally introduce a new sound (strings or synth) that either lifts or toughens the melody.
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 7th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Yeah, I think you're right. A more traditional intro would probably sound better. Don't want to burn the listener out on the melody before it really even gets going. Thanks!

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