Description : This has been in my Pop Folder for a while now so I thought I would get some feedback.
Drums are EZ Drummer. The rest is me on guitar, bass, keyboards...and unfortunately vocals. :)
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Cool track, reminded me of early Ministry and INXS mixed together. I like the git work along side the keys, nice job so far with that. What EZ kit are you using?
I feel your vocals could be louder or more centered, they seem very wide to me in the mix. I actually decrease the width of my vocals to about 90%. This way they are centered and more narrow in my mix. By doing this it helps to keep it from messing with my featured instruments' freqs which I pan wide. Then I use a short delay and a bit of reverb to give me the additional width in the mix while keeping the vocals centered and narrow. Hopefully that makes some sense, he.
Yeah, I can hear the INXS thing. Was never a Ministry person but I will take your word on it. I will have to look and see what Kit I am using here. I took your advice and centered the vocals more and bumped them up in the mix. I went with a more Trippy delay on them to add to the Vibe. Still not sure if it works. Drums and Vocals are my weakest spots. I have worked hard to try and be able to do okay vocals. Never really happy with them, though. Thanks for the feedback. I truly appreciate it.
Hey this is sweet! Really remind me of a combination of fusion and blues jam bands around the eighties or nineties. I can totally get into that vibe, though I'm not a festival-goer. The vocals and guitar jams sound especially pristine, and I enjoy that. The bass is very groovy and deep! I'd say that the only thing that gets old is the EZ Drummer... it's really mostly personal preference though. People tend to get defensive when I talk to much about that sort of thing. Everything else including composition, performance, and lyrics is GREAT!
Hey my friend, thanks for the feedback. I agree with the EZ Drummer. Besides Vocals, it is my biggest weakness. I really need to spend some time working on getting a good drum sound. This was the result of needing to do something other than Rock. A pallet cleanser if you will. :)
Thanks for giving it a listen and for the feedback. Much appreciated.
(Ooops hit the send button by accident lol) Hey Topvega I made this track my fav because I can see the potential of this really being a great tune with some minor alterations. Plus I really enjoyed "The Liveliness" of the song. Great rhythm guitar playing and I liked the "panning of the guitar" on the track. The drum track gave the song a nice lively feel.
My only advice would be, 1. Come up with a solid hook, 2.write another verse in which you can alternate from and 3. Add at least one musical change to the song.(since this is a pop song it becomes a bit redundant without a change of some sort...just my opinion). Other than that I think you have a great tune on your hands.
Yeah I have had that happen before. :-)
I am working on another verse as well as a change or two to break up the monotony. Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.
Description : Spacey and Dancey and Synthwavey and Dreamy
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This is the rough draft. To hear the final version, you can find the official release on streaming services and bandcamp.
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Description : UPDATED 01/03/2023 better volume level
hi guys this is my comeback song, never let them haters beat you.
as you know ive not been around much having gained a successful job and giving that all my attention. ive some catching up to do
this is to CreativeStudios great track The Ride, see what ive done :)). its 5 mins plus. thanks for letting me loose on it Jan.
Description : messed around on my piano, came up with a good idea, and put it in fl studio. I think it turned out pretty great. It would be awsome to get some vocals to this. if you do, feel free to change up the title or whatever. tempo is at 105 if ya need to know. review it and enjoy.
Description : Prod. by Louie Jun and Marbs Music. Diamond Star is the singer. It's on YouTube and SoundCloud. Check out my social media @diamondstarsy.
Description : My original vocal composition with an array of fantastic looperman samples.
Credits;
Production and Mix - 2nick8
Lyrics and Vocals - 2nick8
Music from Looperman Samples
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willaman-xxxtentacion-drama-drums #2
krolbeats-lo-fi-drum-loop
angelwtf14-grand-808-slide
mamagbeats-80s-future-synth-90-bpm
yourboyhs-lovely-pads-90-bpm
krolbeats-synth-percussion-loop
josephfunk-fresh-and-clean-electric-keys-90
djole94hns-smooth-bass-for-beats
alabafruit-simple-hip-hop-drums-90-bpm
thenerve-chill-trap-90bpm
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designedimpression-bass-loop-hip-rap-bass-guitar-90
Description : This one has been sitting on my computer for a bit now but didn't really like it. My friends say it can use some vocals and I think that is what this one needs. If there is anyone who wants to put some vocals on this, send me an email at .magic41151@yahoo.com. or post below. Thanks for tuning in and have a great day!
Description : Based on excellent track by BradoSanz (nothing compares instrumental). I've added an intro, many sliced up vocals, audio effects, and some electric guitar. Includes loops: Holly's Within your soul, and 40A's Unstoppable.
Hope you are all staying safe! I don't know about all of you guys but I was feeling really creative during this pandemic. I'm really proud of it because It reflects a lot of my life and it's an all-round feel-good hopeful ep can't wait to share it. It's out 6.19.20 you can get a sign up for a reminder on my website or just comment below and I'll send it to you when it's out! :) THANKS EVERYONE SO MUCH FOR YOUR SUPPORT FOR THE PASS 4 years!!! #LoopermanFam
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Thanks for the listen and feedback.
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Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated.
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I feel your vocals could be louder or more centered, they seem very wide to me in the mix. I actually decrease the width of my vocals to about 90%. This way they are centered and more narrow in my mix. By doing this it helps to keep it from messing with my featured instruments' freqs which I pan wide. Then I use a short delay and a bit of reverb to give me the additional width in the mix while keeping the vocals centered and narrow. Hopefully that makes some sense, he.
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Thanks for giving it a listen and for the feedback. Much appreciated.
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I appreciate you giving it a listen and a comment.
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My only advice would be, 1. Come up with a solid hook, 2.write another verse in which you can alternate from and 3. Add at least one musical change to the song.(since this is a pop song it becomes a bit redundant without a change of some sort...just my opinion). Other than that I think you have a great tune on your hands.
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I am working on another verse as well as a change or two to break up the monotony. Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.
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