Solid tune has a real good flow, a touch too much depth in the reverb
but over all harmonies are tight, pretty close to being just right...
Something a guitar line would help, bring it to the forefront with a relook
at placement and efx this could really be something Good...

Peace...TG.

I pretty much agree with terrancet on this one. Other than that just keep playing with your mixing and editing skills n you will have pretty solid ground to work with. keep up the good work.

I love the funkiness of the track. I think you need a bassline. But i dont understand the interruptions. I dont know if that is my internet service or audio interface but it really taking away from the track but if your are going to do that then you need to switch up the beat to hardcore RnB with weight behind it (you knwo this is my opinion, right?). Other than that it is an easy listen. But I dont know if your mic is lo fl, but i feel like the low frequencies are missing from your voice to add more presence. But really nice work but it need some work to be ready.