The vocal is in a different key from the muzic. Perhaps upload the muzic without the vocals, maybe someone can do a collaboration that will better compliment your muzic. :-) I don't know much about the technical stuff, but I agree with the power of the kick versus the vocals. Thanks. :-) Oh and, Patricia Edwards, not Henry. :-)

Very cool, I enjoyed this expression with the loop. Good timing with transitions and placements. Nice vocal selection and topic to go with the piano. Drums are a nice addition to glue the mix. As a song its great.

On the tech side, the drums are pushing a little hard on the bass kick. I believe the song would benefit if you lowered the drum volume -4 db from where it's at now on your mixer. Also the piano loop could sit better with the vocals if you lowered its volume about -3. Just my opinion, as is I still feel the message of the song and its really cool. Thank you for using the piano loop and sharing here with us. Keep going! Peace.