Listen To Bright Lights WIP Pop Song By Austinmusic At Looperman.com

This is a brilliant track mate.
Your vocal fits really well.
Great job.
Jamid

What a thrill this song is to listen to! I love your lyric writing skills. I know you were feeling not well when you recorded this, but that actually lends a really nice texture to your vocals; somewhat raw sounding. Obviously, you can hear the nasal quality more at the bridge (2:19). Brilliant work so far!

LovePeace&Light,

Mykael

Yeah really good track but the Drums a little to high i think . Or maybe the whole beat . I agree Danke

hello Austin

this is a very cool track on the vocal and istru side except the drums...the tone of the whole set is very harsh (specially the hihats and the snare) maybe I feel this only but on my humble poinion you should change the whole set...

handshake, Danke

Great track man.. ! This is really cool

Beatz

Just a suggestion, start the drums a bit simpler then build the drums up as the singing gets going to the 16th note hi hats. The intro git was cool. I was thinking to build some more dynamics when you start the drums, maybe build up to the 16th note hi hats with just some kick or a simpler hi hat pattern. The drums work well with how you did the vocals and I'm not disagreeing with the kit you are using(loops, program...) but more suggesting to introduce that continuous hi hat in time.

The part in the middle reminded me of REM actually. I like the idea overall. Listened several times, really do like the middle part, sometimes less is more. Good luck, worth working on and getting it to where you are happy with it!

Wayne

Hi Austin,

Welcome back!
This tune has a lot of potential. You're working things out, and once again, your talent shines, especially your vocals. They're "like buttah." Can't wait to hear the finished track.