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8th Nov 2017 15:43 - 7 years ago
Description : Hello all! Been away for awhile, finally writing new material.
(EDIT: Finished lyrics, put in last chorus. I'm sick right now so excuse if my voice is especially nasally and out of tune.)
Found this guitar on here, everything else is me. Threw on some drums, bass, keys, and strings by me and really digging it. Still a work in progress, lots of issues, shitty
vocals. Need to figure out transitions for bridge and last chorus, finish lyrics, but let me know your thoughts!

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give austinmusic some feedback.

DijamMusic
DijamMusic 11th Nov 2017 00:42 - 7 years ago
This is a brilliant track mate.
Your vocal fits really well.
Great job.
Jamid
Mykael
Mykael 10th Nov 2017 07:18 - 7 years ago
What a thrill this song is to listen to! I love your lyric writing skills. I know you were feeling not well when you recorded this, but that actually lends a really nice texture to your vocals; somewhat raw sounding. Obviously, you can hear the nasal quality more at the bridge (2:19). Brilliant work so far!

LovePeace&Light,

Mykael
austinmusic
austinmusic replied 10th Nov 2017 - 7 years ago
Thanks so much, really appreciate it! So glad you liked it.
hashmet
hashmet 9th Nov 2017 15:26 - 7 years ago
Yeah really good track but the Drums a little to high i think . Or maybe the whole beat . I agree Danke
Danke
Danke 9th Nov 2017 13:06 - 7 years ago
hello Austin

this is a very cool track on the vocal and istru side except the drums...the tone of the whole set is very harsh (specially the hihats and the snare) maybe I feel this only but on my humble poinion you should change the whole set...

handshake, Danke
austinmusic
austinmusic replied 10th Nov 2017 - 7 years ago
Thanks! Interesting, I agree the drums are a loud - the track isn't mixed yet - but I actually like the set a lot.
BeatzFactory
BeatzFactory 9th Nov 2017 06:40 - 7 years ago
Great track man.. ! This is really cool

Beatz
austinmusic
austinmusic replied 10th Nov 2017 - 7 years ago
Thank you!
theHumps
theHumps 8th Nov 2017 21:44 - 7 years ago
Just a suggestion, start the drums a bit simpler then build the drums up as the singing gets going to the 16th note hi hats. The intro git was cool. I was thinking to build some more dynamics when you start the drums, maybe build up to the 16th note hi hats with just some kick or a simpler hi hat pattern. The drums work well with how you did the vocals and I'm not disagreeing with the kit you are using(loops, program...) but more suggesting to introduce that continuous hi hat in time.

The part in the middle reminded me of REM actually. I like the idea overall. Listened several times, really do like the middle part, sometimes less is more. Good luck, worth working on and getting it to where you are happy with it!

Wayne
austinmusic
austinmusic replied 8th Nov 2017 - 7 years ago
Hey, thanks. Just updated it to take out the hi hat in the first verse and lower it in the second. Think I like it, thanks for the suggestion!
wikkid
wikkid 8th Nov 2017 16:09 - 7 years ago
Hi Austin,

Welcome back!
This tune has a lot of potential. You're working things out, and once again, your talent shines, especially your vocals. They're "like buttah." Can't wait to hear the finished track.
austinmusic
austinmusic replied 8th Nov 2017 - 7 years ago
Thank you! :)

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