listened all your work now and you jus' getting betta gal, jus' keep doin' wot ya doin man, your good at this shit Aaliyah

im really likin this one. its got the feel of a woman scorn. another ladies anthem.

i'm a writter from the U.S and if we where ever to cross and you would be ok with making a remix to this song i came up with a few bars like for a male artist to rap..
Ya beat is as beautiful as you
Ya guy must be a straight foul
Cause you wifey material
talent with so much beauty
in the back of your mind I know your hearing (pause)
do me(pause)do me(pause)do me(pause)one mo time(pause)do me
What’s wrong with ya guy that dude he must be blind
And yet we must be too
too say with the ones that Treat us so cruel
(whisper)“yes so cruel”
(soft under/addlip whisper)"Why"
cause our hearts won't let us leave
you cheat
(whisper)"please"
but still i stay with you

I took a listen to all your work and you are headed in the right direction, but to the key to having really hot teacks and clean music is your mix. Your heading states that you want to improve so I want to help you with that. Kicks and snares and claps max them out, make them hit as hard as your Keyboard or Software will let you. You highs sould stay middle, not to high cause it takes away from your sound. the rest of you sounds Keys, horns bells whatever sould be mixed at that mid level, depending on the over all sound of the project. Trust and beleave me you will hear the difference, and real talk your a beast in the making. Good luck and keep in touch

Love the piano keys in this, everythings clean and arranged well, smooth tempo, nice job on this one cutie!!!

This is on point right here anytime you make a track about someone doing you wrong they always come out good great job also check out some more of my tracks are you going to do r&b if so holla back at me.not trying to get at you or anything but damn you sexxy!!!!!!!!!