Description : **** UPDATED ****
After reading some comment, i've experienced some improvement to the track, trying keeping the original idea in my mind. So, after two months, these are the changes: better balancing of sounds, more fatty kicks, less redundancy of the reverberations, uplifted formant bass. Featuring Stepa K.
The open bars would just be filled up with either rap or a duo ballad for starters.. I have some words jotted down if you want to here just hit up my contact info
I have a production ear for what’s marketable even if raw talent presented
Not throwing names out there though I’ve known a few things since pre teens and had talent for longest.. Don’t sell out stay true and I know you got this
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Hit me up if you’re serious about it being ready doe radio play. It’ll be around autumn for the season to match the mood. Just let me know I have some marketing ideas that’ll I’ll follow through on
Hi mate, what a beautiful track you have here, chilled yet uplifting from start to finish. My only, and this is my personal opinion nothing more, observation or comment is that the drum track could be a little stronger or more upfront. This is only my opinion, the track itself is outstanding. Thanks for sharing.
Oh wow... about drums, you're not the only argueing upfront or strenght... well, first edit had "phantom weight", then i add a stronger and deeper kick on the original "real" drum... i listen final result with the i-phone earphones, which has the best quality audio... and, despite you warn that they are not very powerful, in that earphones sounds a tiny tiny distortion.... About attack, i try to get the kick early but the result was not consistent with the original idea I had in mind... anyway, i'm glad you like it,
for me it means that I managed to convey the positive sensations I felt during the composition!
Nicolo, really nice work here. The choice on the chord progression is really interesting, it gives the piece a melancholy feel with the dissonant notes combined with the vocals. I did a song with these vocals and came up with something completely different....actually like your version much better. Mix sounds nice to these worn out ears. Well done my friend. I hope all is well.
I really like, however, note the drums do not have enough pressure for my taste, try it once with paralell Compressing .. test (New York Compression) there are some You tube video (but only on the drums ) https://recording-blog.com/der-new-york-kompression-trick-new-york-compression
this is a German one but .. very good !!
After few millions times listening to this (ahaha), maybe this is not properly a dance song, is an half-way between dance and pop, probably more pop than dance. In any case, i noted your suggestion. Until users gives their help, i leave all the songs as you listen. Then, apply all tips :) Thank you!
Great track. I have to agree with TheHumps on bringing in the bass and drum beat in earlier. Waiting almost a minute before the beat kicks in is too long a wait for a dance track. Maybe at 0.42 when his vocals change, that would be the place to bring them in, imho.
Still, this is a wonderful piece, and your music compliments Steppa K's vocals nicely. Gotta fave this one, as your skills are readily on display. Great job.
Thank you for the honest feedback. By now i'm waiting for other users suggestions, then i fix following tips. In the future i'll open a YouTube channell, i put the final result with all the comments!
Nice job on this bro. Everything sounds well balanced and structured. My only suggestion is more variation on the drum track and pumping up that kick. The drum track is the weak link in here.
Maybe you won't believe me, i made this on a 2009 netbook, the only valuable thing is the I-Phone earphones, that are the best quality sound earphones i ever use. I wonder to listen to this on a professional audio stuff.... Thank you for the chance you give.
Wow thank you Patriciaaaa! If you want, we can collab making something new... (for your voice I could even write music that is closer to your style) Luv Ya
Very well done! Catchy track for sure, has a pop sensibility with a dance influence.
As someone who believes in getting to the hook or chorus quickly, I would bring the bass and drum beat in earlier. Long intros loose interest in my opinion, especially if you are looking for "imaginary radio airplay". I know you are trying to go for the big dance genre intro but honestly, those songs aren't on the radio for that reason. It has potential in the dance clubs if lengthened or pop potential if shortened and remixed for that crowd.
I would add a little more bass to the mix too. Not bad for 6 hours!
I am totally agree. The question is: why not half-way? We are talking about imagination, so in another dimension (another life) maybe this track is a planetary success, in the dancefloors the same as in the radio airplay. Never too old to dream :) Thank you for give a chance on this, i got your tips and maybe can fix the fixable :)
Nicely Done, The arrangement and mix is on point. I like the fact the you created a song and not just a beat. Well produced and full of life. Great Job.
Description : I have been using LooperMan for practice for some time now. This my most recent track. The only loop in the song is BabyGee's vocals. Free to download and if you repost tag me so I can share it as well.
Description : A psychedelic techno cello epic. It's not really techno as it's only 110 BPM but something like that (eg breakbeat), with lots of banging beats and arpeggiated acid synths, plus a whole load of my layered cello playing techniques. There aren't that many synths used but they do a lot of work and are carefully automated. No guitar. Drums are mostly a lot of drum loops, supported by a few programmed acoustic drumkits. Very busy and complicated with loads of different sections (funky, chilled, fast, heavy) that make up a constantly progressing trip. I don't know if there's any other cello music like this so let me know if you think there is. Interesting feedback appreciated - criticism, praise, ideas etc. Enjoy...
Description : Summer type dance track, for those precious 2 weeks off, if you can get them! Made around a selection of different loops and some keys from me.
Description : Inspired by an experimental percussion piece I heard. Rhythmic ticking builds into pounding beats and heavy soundscapes. I haven't done any mixing or mastering yet so tell me what you think. Any and all comments are welcome.
Description : A song about a damaged soul. Sadly, based on a true story. Gorgeous loops here are by Hardstyle Rythm, Aboe, and Princess Hollywood. All basslines by that fiendish genius Rasputin. Take a bow, gentlemen
Description : Pretty basic dance track. Was experimenting with the Falcon synth plugin, hence the name. Instrumentation for the melody lines might be a bit unusual, more orchestral. Vocoder is from the Icarus synth plugin, a great new instrument.
Description : Hello everyone here's a song from my album anymore that really is near and dear to my heart I hope you guys and enjoy it and never let anyone bring you down or tell you that you are good enough!
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Many Thanks!
Très bon son, très propre sur le mixage et mélodiquement parlant très réussi. Le genre de morceau qui s'écoute, se ré écoute etc... sans lassitude!
Très bonne composition! l'instru, pas nécessairement compliquée, accompagne super bien les vocals, c'est très actuel comme son, très frais, ca sent l'été :)
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I have a production ear for what’s marketable even if raw talent presented
Not throwing names out there though I’ve known a few things since pre teens and had talent for longest.. Don’t sell out stay true and I know you got this
..
great work
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for me it means that I managed to convey the positive sensations I felt during the composition!
tu es un grand homme mon ami
Bear
In a (virtual) place like this, where everyone try to be always more (better) than others, your sincerity is a gift that I greatly appreciate.
You made my day a better day.
Nicolo'
Nicolo????
https://recording-blog.com/der-new-york-kompression-trick-new-york-compression
this is a German one but .. very good !!
Eric
Great track. I have to agree with TheHumps on bringing in the bass and drum beat in earlier. Waiting almost a minute before the beat kicks in is too long a wait for a dance track. Maybe at 0.42 when his vocals change, that would be the place to bring them in, imho.
Still, this is a wonderful piece, and your music compliments Steppa K's vocals nicely. Gotta fave this one, as your skills are readily on display. Great job.
This is joyous, euphoric and delectable. Serotonin candy.
TA
Cru
I can see myself dancing to this!
This is well put together! Great Job!
StafJ
As someone who believes in getting to the hook or chorus quickly, I would bring the bass and drum beat in earlier. Long intros loose interest in my opinion, especially if you are looking for "imaginary radio airplay". I know you are trying to go for the big dance genre intro but honestly, those songs aren't on the radio for that reason. It has potential in the dance clubs if lengthened or pop potential if shortened and remixed for that crowd.
I would add a little more bass to the mix too. Not bad for 6 hours!
Wayne
Dirtzilla
Well done.
Jamid