A beautiful theme...creative success!

cool tune man anymore ?

Nice melody work, the drums need better mixing. But that only comes with time for this being your first one, that's no issue at all. Idk why this is only now popping up for me to check out, but I'm glad I did. Nice work, hopefully you have done more since this.

Good work...A-ok. keep growing brother.

Sweet track nice synth works

But that's a real shame because I think you have great talent. But I can understand that well, because you have to set priorities in your life. Best wishes for your future, Manuela

Hello, almost 3 years have passed since you composed this song. I think you've tried other songs in the meantime? If I had heard this song back then, I would have said, "Great, really good song he did! It's a very good result for his first work." But now, after such a long time, I ask myself whether you have continued working on this song in the meantime? When I read through the old comments, they still apply today. After a great intro, the song unfortunately suffers a little from a lot of little things that have already been described here. In principle the song is good in terms of structure and the use of instruments. You could do so much more with the song. Revise it for the mix, the master and a few timing errors. It is worth it !

Kind regards, Manuela

This is so good if this is your first track i like the synth Work on this! Nicely done!

Nice! Any new songs coming out soon? :) There must be some melodies in your mind and you must have grown the past 3 years, right? :)
Looking forward to more!

Nice work. Simple and yet powerful sound. I agree with Lek on the drums and Mabe calm the synths down a few dB or so. Just my opinion. Solid track for the first one. PEACE. T576 OUT.

Congrats on your first Loop Trap, nice sound, you've done yourself proud here nice synth and percussion and a great arrangement, I'm sure we will here more from u, well done bro

dope stuff man! Very monstercat vibes nice work!

Nice percussion and Synth lead. The whole thing Rolls along rather nicely. A bit piercing in spots though. A compressor on the track hitting the piercing frequencies can iron that out. It takes some trial & error to work all those details out. I've been doing this for 3 years now & I'm still working out details. Great job on this man.

Sounds great for your first full song.
I almost never listen to this genre but this was nice listening.

Hey, congrats on your first song. Nice melody you've produced. I would've made the drums a fair bit more prominent in the mix, but maybe that's just me, it's all personal preference after all. Nice work :)