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13th Sep 2021 17:15 - 3 years ago
Description : So I just made another retro-styled pop beat, but I feel like it's still not my best. Meanwhile making this beat, I realized you can't make a good song by using VSTs. Anyway, I'm too shy to show you my lead vocals.

The lead vocals are actually pretty catchy, especially the bridge. I caught myself singing it randomly. I'll put the lyrics below, in case you wanna imagine it. I hope you enjoy my bcg vocals lol

I need feedback pleaseee

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give MrRivus some feedback.

Danke
Danke 14th Sep 2021 19:59 - 3 years ago
this is a very good song ... absolute catchy ... vocs are so moody ... for my taste the master or mix is a bit overpowered though ...
handshake, Danke
Zootman
Zootman 14th Sep 2021 19:41 - 3 years ago
I'd agree this really starts to fly at that section at 1:48. Don't be shy, as Pseudoble says you can do all sorts to your voice. I hide behind shit all the time lol
Bilbozo
Bilbozo 14th Sep 2021 05:37 - 3 years ago
Great dynamic vibe happening here. Great for singing vocals at any level. I'd really like to hear your vox on it. Vocally each step in overcoming that challenge is making the first leap of confidence. Cheers and great song
ioncewas
ioncewas 13th Sep 2021 20:38 - 3 years ago
Hi MrRivus, I'd really like to hear the one with your vocals; which VSTs did you use on this one?
dimestop
dimestop 13th Sep 2021 19:08 - 3 years ago
Nice to see you back MrRivus it's got the makings of something here,the first third is well after the initial inttro your like waiting for something to happen and it doesn't, it gets better as it goes, the poundin keys etc the vocal, makes it larger, this is in no way a diss it's a good track, maybe a couple tweaks and an early vocal will make it better. Keep sharing bruv, hope you get a collab
MrRivus
MrRivus replied 17th Sep 2021 - 3 years ago
Thank you so much for listening to my track! It means a lot... Well, I hope too that someday I'll get a collab lol
pseudoble
pseudoble 13th Sep 2021 18:45 - 3 years ago
The last quarter works really well and lifts the song beautifully - before that it sounds pretty good but not really flying (if you know what I mean). Have you tried some of the vocal effects on your voice (ovox, vocal bender, etc.)- they might let you hide whatever it is that irks you and still work okay with the track : )
MrRivus
MrRivus replied 17th Sep 2021 - 3 years ago
Thank you ;)
Well, the thing that annoys me in my voice is that it's kind of shaky and sometimes I get off the pitch, and it's not strong at all since I can't practice at home, and there's no place where I can practice... So I don't practice at all. So let's say my voice is kind of "unpracticed". Anyway, thank you for listening! ;)

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