This isn't at all my preferred genre, but you've done well with it. It has a real late 80s early 90s pop rock feel to it. The guitar almost sounds like it could have been influenced by Mick Mars. Good work.
Oh, maybe one tiny thing. I note that from around 2:40-3:00 the vocal is slightly trailing behind the drums (the snare), and it might pay off to align that a bit more? Or was that intentional?
Hi Baobou! you may be right about the alignment of the voice on the chorus, I stole the song from you tube (without having the real tempo) and I extracted the voice with accapella extractor, I got a little pissed off on this piece but I found the voice interesting, anyway, you know I don't spend a lot of time on the pieces, I try to find the right balance between the tone of voice and the style of music (sometimes It's not very successful lol!)
Michael
Ready to go mainstream, this is as usual a monster track. Man, I wish I could spend a day producing and learning with you :D Absolutely delicious drums too. I note how the snare really pops out - let me see if I can emulate that a bit :) Do you use a gate on the snare mic?
Hi guy! to answer your question, I compress the drums very little, since when you go from wave to mp3 you lose dynamics, I don't know if that answers your question but I work like that! thank you for listening and commenting!
Michael
Nice build up to the chorus and a great transition into it. Sounds great, the vocals are fantastic and the music suits them very well. Solid track. Well done Michael and to Lauren as well!!
Hey dude! no problem uploading the song, just specify Lauren for the vocals and Phantom live production for the music, but I think you will have better sound quality on my soundcloud (phantom live production)
Michael
hey Michael! when this things breaks open a third of the way thru, it rides a really powerful wave right to the end! it’s an exciting and really well-made song. my fav perf from the pair of you yet!
Very professional and polished rock band sound with superb guitar work, great groove, amazing vocal and a top class sound production.(this style of rock is not something I listen to so much but it reminds me of the band 'Heart'). Really well done : )
hey Michael this is great, i agree with Chris its more rock with a pop edge. genres are for anoraks really, the vox are red hot the sound production is great and its difficult to use vocals from another track and fit them perfect on new music ive done it a few times here with big pun biggie the specials pet shop boys and its a mess about to get everything tight. one of the main reason i started to write my own and TRY to sing :)) but i do love just sampling and adding my own bits and fx, thats what got me interested in this world, i'll never be great but i will eventually start writing bits in the piano roll. never did i expect to become engulfed in production, its because of this site and its people. this mate was a beautiful listen for me very well done
Hi Paul, like Chris I think you're right, this track sounds a bit more rock than pop (probably my hard rock roots resurfacing) but with Lauren's Voice I really like the rock side of her timbre!
Michael
Great stuff. I'm always suspicious when I see the pop genre but this is more rock than pop. It has a great drive to it, sweet guitars, excellent song. Congratulations man.
brilliant tune ... the groove is outstanding as those rhythm guitars ... in the chorus, I feel a little slip between the music and the vocals, but maybe it's just me... regardless, it's one of the best pop songs I've heard on this site...
fistbump, Danke
Hi Dank! when you dub a piece that was made with another music, it's not always easy to "stall" everything, especially when I don't spend a lot of time on it, personally it didn't shock me more than that, the ideal would be to put the song after the music but with Lauren it is not possible!
Thanks for your listenning and comment !
Michael
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I totally agree with Danke.
I love Lauren's voice
Great track.
Well done
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Performance off the charts good.
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Peace...
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Beautifull track with a beautiffull voice .
That deep sound that you use at 1:49 wow!!
all with all a great pop song.
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