Description : Hey LM gang, I wanted to try something different and away from my comfort zone. I created a simple drum beat and I worked around it by adding different synth sounds. I had lots of fun creating this. Feel free to share your thoughts, and feel free to hit that DL button if you wish to keep it. I hope you'll enjoy it. Pleasant listening.
Regards
Pete
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Wow, that's all in all a really strong song. I love the section from around 2:25 (Vangelis), then around 3:45 there was another highlight and then at the end from 5:00 you tie it all together. Very strong.
I also have 2 possible improvements you could think about:
- you almost lost me at the intro. I get what you're doing, but I almost skipped ahead to the next song thinking "oh it's one of those." But I am so glad I kept listening!
Your song is plenty long enough, so I think you could cut to the chase, or maybe start similar to what we now hear around 4:30. That I think would grab the listener immediately by the throat and tell him what this song is about.
- there is a background mid-high wailing noise (it starts around 0:32) which I don't like at all :D see if you feel it's integral to your song or maybe you can replace it. To me it sounds like an annoying toddler ;)
All in all, let my "improvements" not deter you. This is really really good and I want to hear more! Have a great weekend!
Hey guy, hope all is good and well. Can't thank you enough for taking time to listen and share your honest review. I did take your advice into consideration and I agree that the wailing sound was not a good fit. Just didn't think much of it when I incorporated it into the song. My wife didn't like it much either lol. I did take a different approach in the beginning and I think it sounds a bit better. Thanks again for the kind words. Until next time.
Regards,
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I also have 2 possible improvements you could think about:
- you almost lost me at the intro. I get what you're doing, but I almost skipped ahead to the next song thinking "oh it's one of those." But I am so glad I kept listening!
Your song is plenty long enough, so I think you could cut to the chase, or maybe start similar to what we now hear around 4:30. That I think would grab the listener immediately by the throat and tell him what this song is about.
- there is a background mid-high wailing noise (it starts around 0:32) which I don't like at all :D see if you feel it's integral to your song or maybe you can replace it. To me it sounds like an annoying toddler ;)
All in all, let my "improvements" not deter you. This is really really good and I want to hear more! Have a great weekend!
Regards,
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