Beautiful sensitive piano intro with vocals very reminiscent of the good times of Kate Bush. Unfortunately, you completely ignored the basic pitch of the singing in your instrumental accompaniment. That makes the song interesting but not perfect. The other instruments, such as the guitar, are also nice to listen to. Everything is wonderful on its own, but overall there is a lack of cohesion. Change the key to that of the vocals and work on the syncronity a bit, then it will be a really great song! Greetings Manuela

hi dude , like Baobou I think a little synchronization work would be welcome! nice part piano !
Michael

That's a lovely piano, but I don't think the beat fits it, and I don't feel the vocal is in sync either. It might still be an interesting combination, but I do think it needs work.